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Author Name: Freebluefish 6 Comments
Date Added: March 31, 2006 17:03:35 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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untrodden

i cannot be quenched

from my thirst.

as others drink their fill

upon another lips.

smooth and encompassing

i was not made

for this geometry

my shape in not inviting

so i drink my lack

and trod in paths

of unshod leaves

and untold boundaries.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on April 1, 2006 09:54:02 AM Report
Andrew~
Haunting write..expressed well.
Blessings,
(*Moon~
Comment By: Freeaaron payne on March 31, 2006 10:03:18 PM Report
very good. -ap
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on March 31, 2006 07:57:44 PM Report
Liked the geometry line. I wonder if anyone is shaped for it.
Comment By: FreeHeike on March 31, 2006 06:40:07 PM Report
Very touching piece, Andrew, your way with words is unique. Believe me, I know that freedom is sometimes hard to cope with... but remember what you have.
~Heike
Comment By: FreeJamie on March 31, 2006 05:47:54 PM Report
Good write>>?"



Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 31, 2006 05:40:43 PM Report
ANDREW, YOU WANT ANOTHER LOVE AND SHE IS WITH SOMEONE ELE HOW SO THIRSTY OUR LIPS BECOME FOR THERES,, SO HAUNTING AND SADNESS I KNOW OF THIS KIND OF BURNING FOR SOMEONE YOU WANT AND KNOW YOU WILL NEVER SEE OR TOUCH.
LOVE YA! HUGS ~ SHE




 


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