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Author Name: Freebluefish 4 Comments
Date Added: March 27, 2006 17:03:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Empty World

i wish to brush my lips

against your skin

my lips speak 

the most beautiful words

 trace in silence the

the curves and circumferences of your face …

 

so sublime and mysterious

when they rub against yours.

how can it be

that you. give me such light

brilliant how the  warmth flows inspires

spirals in the corners of your smiles …

 

unbroken streams of your hair cloaks me

 in spite of the bare sentences

i speak to illuminate

dimly the darkness of my flesh.

and find my utterances

without solace

as the trees of years

disembark their leaves

and i walk through the empty words

i have gifted you

and the wind touches

with remembrance….…..

as i walk with the limp of circles

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAngelface on September 13, 2009 12:42:49 AM Report
This was a very interresting read! I really enjoyed the read! Keep up the wonderful work!

 

Angelface

Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on March 28, 2006 07:03:46 PM Report
Andrew~
You have blessed us once again with your beautiful words~
Keep smiling and have a great week!
(*Moon~
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 27, 2006 09:16:38 PM Report
ANDREW , OH THIS MOVES THE MIND WITH EMOTION.. THIS PASSION YOU HAVE FOR THIS LADY IS BEAUTIFUL.. YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE LIKE THIS.. I KNOW SHE WILL LOVE THIS POEM..HUGS ~ SHE
Comment By: Freeellie on March 27, 2006 08:58:02 PM Report
i love it very good its so full of emotion




 


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