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Author Name: Freesybilvane 16 Comments
Date Added: March 16, 2006 17:03:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Nocturnal Encounter

We were both walking the night

Knowing that the day breaks

The bones of freedom

Nothing ever took me by surprise

In the way you did

You showed me everything:

The city's blurred splendour

White elephants around the corner

Nightingales singing bass

My guilt dispersed into tiny scrapes

That you brushed away swiftly

And then

You touched me

Beneath all the layers

Now the moon's shining through me

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on July 11, 2007 04:31:09 PM Report
such beauty and thought provoking images now tattooed on the mind, lovingly presented here, well done,

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on July 29, 2006 06:01:44 PM Report
Now the moon is shing through me..Amazingly clever concept...You have miles of style, Heiki...len
Comment By: FreeChuck on June 16, 2006 06:54:23 PM Report
You are an amazing writer... I always enjoy your work... this one is fantastic.
Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on May 27, 2006 09:05:57 AM Report
Sounds like he lit up your night. Isn't love wonderful? Very very nice. jp
Comment By: FreeJeff on May 1, 2006 03:53:53 PM Report
Beautiful writing Heike.
Very impressive.
Jeff
Comment By: FreeT. G. T on April 30, 2006 06:23:35 AM Report
This is just brilliant. "Now the moon's shining through me"... what a powerful line... when in love we feel we can expose ourselves completely to that person who loves us in return.

T. G. T
Comment By: FreePaul Peter McLean on April 9, 2006 06:55:19 PM Report
Great poem Heike. I love the way you arrange the line breaks, so that the ambiguity of the words you use is emphasised, such as "breaks" at the end of line 2. It sounds like quite an encounter took place here, either spiritual or romantic. But it left the person you address in the poem able to see right through you, perhaps in a literal and metaphorical sense. There is so much to this poem, it needs to be reread. And rereread... Well done, Heike.
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on April 2, 2006 03:48:36 PM Report
I wait impatiently for the next poem from you Heiki and you never disappoint! This is exquisite. I agree with Joanna below. I feel that this poem will evoke such tender memories in anyone who has known that sweet experience of falling so much in love 'that the moon shines through them'.
phenomenal imagery. A poet to your bones. thank you for reminding me how it should be done
Ali x
ps into favs
Comment By: FreeJoanna Szymanska on March 29, 2006 04:06:13 PM Report
here it has happened again.I don't know why, Heike, but when I am reading your poems I wander through my memories. Have you ever had such a feeling? Thank you again
Comment By: FreeJoanna Szymanska on March 29, 2006 04:04:00 PM Report

Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on March 26, 2006 10:03:06 PM Report
I read this as someone helping to open your eyes to the world. I love the last line. jp
Comment By: FreeEric on March 23, 2006 01:31:46 AM Report
This is a wonderful poem, its images are phenomenal.
EricF
Comment By: FreeAndrew Rymill on March 18, 2006 09:11:19 PM Report
Heike,
wonderfull poem. The images you have crafted and have created are embude with a strange magic that makes one want to read over again your poem...
Gtreat work...
~Andrew
Comment By: FreeShruti on March 18, 2006 06:53:05 AM Report
I loved this one especially Heike, this was reminding me of an incident, but not as a whole- in pieces, bit by bit, and the rest just puts itself together. Wonderful.
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on March 17, 2006 07:06:42 PM Report
What a fascinating encounter. As always, Heike, your phrasing and imagery are exquisite. ML
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on March 16, 2006 05:55:10 PM Report
This is beautiful Heike.

I liked the surreal feel to it~

best wishes.
Pamela




 


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