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Author Name: FreeNewKing 2 Comments
Date Added: March 01, 2006 14:03:14 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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The Dreamer
Its' better to dream
Than to be alive
But I can't sleep anymore
I knew that someday
I would wake again
But I'm not ready just yet
Thrown back into life
By unseen hands
Demons of sorrow and sadness
Transformed by liquor into madness
Deep in my dream
Voices told me:"Wake up
Get a grip, I'll wait no more"
Through the shadows of my mind
Came a scene from the dense of time
Laying on the floor in a puddle of booze
I rolled over and puked on your shoes
Standing in the door you said:
"Wake up, get a grip, I'll wait no more"
It's better to live
Than be living in a dream
And finally I'm awake
The day has arrived
It's time to beŽ agian
And I think I'm ready
Pulled from a dream
By wings from the sky
Free from my demons I can see
See the person I'm gonna be
Author's Notes:
It's so easy to ignore things, but you can only do that for so long....
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on March 2, 2006 10:10:49 AM Report
This had the makings of something good but you should make up your mind if its going to be rhyming or not one or the other as it spoils the the readers concentration and hampers the flow, not having a go trying to be constructive.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 2, 2006 12:26:31 AM Report
INTERESTING POEM.. YOU JUST HAVE TO GET YOUR LIFE TOGETHER.. GREAT POEM ~ SHE




 


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