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Author Name: FreeNewKing 5 Comments
Date Added: February 25, 2006 08:02:05 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Type: Rhyming
Category: Depression Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Proof of a shitty world

In a world full of pain
No two things are the same

 

In a world full of hurt
Covered neck down in dirt

 

You see children go by
With no life in their eyes

 

First a boy, then a girl
All been raped by the world

 

If your heart is alive
Then you will start to cry

 

In a world
Of endless missery

Author's Notes:

It seems as though most of my poems comes to me when im down or angry.

While i wrote this one I was less than impressed with how the world works. Im still not impressed.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeS on May 25, 2007 11:18:57 AM Report
yeh life is not fair for many but thats just the way it goes

 

nice write

Comment By: FreeAmanda on September 12, 2006 06:40:08 PM Report
Heart wrenching because I know the very feeling. The world is a very messed up place. And this poem is amazing.

~Saphira

Comment By: Freelost n love on March 2, 2006 02:40:29 PM Report
i agree with rebecca and angel all the way. it has so much truth and people dont open there eyes to whats happening in this world. loved it and great job.^_^
Comment By: FreeRebeca Weiss on February 25, 2006 12:13:21 PM Report
I agree with you and Angel completely. It seems that too many people have just stopped caring. This was a wonderful, truthful write, great job! :0)
~Beca
Comment By: FreeAngel on February 25, 2006 11:07:37 AM Report
Yes, a lot of truth in this write. Makes me so angry to. If we all helped make this world a better place then it would become a nicer place in which to live. I have shed tears for the young the old all human beings who have to suffer. Their is to much greed self and hatred in this world I agree.

Wonderful venting

Love Angelxx




 


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