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Author Name: Freehnk903 8 Comments
Date Added: February 23, 2006 16:02:25 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Underneath the stars

Enveloped by darkness
We lay on a blanket underneath the stars
I am lost in eyes reflected by moonlight
A luminescent glow lights your face
Your beauty enhanced in starshine
How lucky I am to hold you so close
To feel you next to me
Heaven is a mere heartbeat away
I reach for you and pull you close
Place a kiss upon your soft, sweet lips
I see stars with eyes closed
You have transported me to a special place
A place you alone can take me to
The stars appear to be within our grasp
We both see them with unopen eyes
On a blanket underneath the stars
A wonderful discovery is made
Amidst starshine and moonglow
In the shadow of nature's great stage
I found that one special woman
Knowing you are everything I have looked for
I am fortunate that on this night
I have the greatest gift lying next to me

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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on August 27, 2010 12:44:01 AM Report
"one special woman"...and she is a keeper! Wow, I feel a very strong connection with her in this poem. "Knowing you are everything I have looked for" ...sigh, I hope you realize her worth each and every day. This lovely poem is filled with admiration and appreciation...the stuff of love...keep the love strong Henry! Well done!

~Barbara D.~

Comment By: FreeWide Awake on March 18, 2006 02:05:31 PM Report
How beautiful :)

Sounds like a lovely daydream...even if it were fact recounted~ it still holds a dreamlike quality.


Best wishes,
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on March 14, 2006 06:49:13 AM Report
There is nothing more beautiful than love that recognizes such gift. A treasure Henry. This is a treasure. Beautiful, heartfelt work. ~Pam
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on February 28, 2006 01:05:21 PM Report
MY HEARTS BEATING AND I SIGH....Henry, you are amazing....this one has your name all over it!
beautiful..romantic...and so very passionate....just the kind i love so much!!

great piece of work here

~always cindy
Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on February 25, 2006 10:09:14 AM Report
Henry, I can feel the joy in that revelation of finding the one. Lovely poem. jp
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on February 24, 2006 11:54:14 PM Report
WOW! Henry, I didn't know you had it in you, you ole romantic you! Excellent my friend, Joe
Comment By: FreeGlata on February 24, 2006 07:48:55 AM Report
Henry, this is absolutely stunning! Oh, yes...swooning like a southern belle is absolutely right! Wow, what strong romance is revealed here! Totally beautiful, Henry...and you are GREAT at this free-verse stuff!
Southern Glata :)
Comment By: Freeb doneff on February 23, 2006 06:36:00 PM Report
Oooooooweeeeeeeee! Henry has gone romantic on us and has us swoonin like southern belles, lol..really a delectible read Henry..Barbie, who likes blankets, lol


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