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Author Name: FreeBlueyd553 33 Comments
Date Added: September 13, 2010 00:09:10 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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I Dream



I Dream

 

I dream
When on my bed I lay sleeping
Your face I see so perfectly
The closeness of your breath
Rising softly, gently
In rhythm with my own beating heart
It is then I know our souls are one
You, so far away
I, on this peaceful island
And in my dreams I hold you near
 
As peacefulness washes over me
I slip into the sleep of angels
Deeply cast into an ocean of slumber
Teeming with endless possibilities
I swim toward the beauty of your love
And marvel at this pearl
This dreamworld lies unaffected
By the struggles of this earth
Dark and secret to our hearts
Untouched by this world's care
I dream, I dream

I dream

Author's Notes:

Acknowledgements to Avalonian Sigs

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Flaming June

by

Lord Frederick Leighton

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 3, 2010 08:03:15 PM Report
Very dreamy poem, Cindy, just full of gentle and loving mind images...len
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on September 21, 2010 01:47:33 PM Report
A dream of a poem Cindy! One that casts a spell of somnombulance over the reader bringing them into the dream with you. I remember this one well Cindy, I'm glad you reposted it.  Hugs,   Henry
Comment By: FreeFilthy on September 17, 2010 04:57:28 PM Report
That's some darn fine writing.
Comment By: Freeleroytaylorlyon on September 16, 2010 05:59:20 PM Report
kool poem
Comment By: Freeleroytaylorlyon on September 16, 2010 05:59:17 PM Report
kool poem
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on September 14, 2010 03:19:09 PM Report
dream on and  write on

and right on with your heart

Comment By: FreeAlfred Berggren on September 14, 2010 01:08:11 PM Report
A beautiful dream that tells of your love for a certain person. The picture is outstanding and adds so much to your poem.
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 14, 2010 04:19:28 AM Report
Lovely Cindy. Full of delicate and sweet imagery and the pic is perfect!
 Alison x
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on September 13, 2010 03:55:27 PM Report
Bravo Cindy.  You made me sleepy!
Comment By: FreeTanya Harrison on September 13, 2010 03:55:26 PM Report
Bravo Cindy.  You made me sleepy!
Comment By: FreeTristan on September 13, 2010 03:08:43 PM Report
...and, dear Cyn, you have impaled your thoughts deep into my heart -- not to wound, but to endear yourself to me through that part of us which is the link between reality and our imagination -- our power to dream...  the dream that binds our freedom and our souls.  I always remembered that I would never play the role of a fool as long as I could dream.  You have reminded me of truths I'd long forgotten.  Thank you for the recollection and for the beauty of your pen -- which has awakened my heart.  Tristan
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on September 13, 2010 11:55:03 AM Report
I was talking to some people recently who said they have never experienced a dream.  I don't know if they were yanking my chain but your poem describes perfectly what they are missing. 
Comment By: FreeAndrew on September 13, 2010 08:20:48 AM Report
such restful and restorative sleep of such a nature can be, much the same as your loving description of this blissful state.  you create a place where we long to be (but often are not able to find).  Soft, sweet, romantic - much like the author.  very well done, as always.
Comment By: FreeMoonStar on September 13, 2010 02:16:17 AM Report
Now this was superb Cindy! I found myself softly sighing as each word was absorbed into my thoughts. Wonderful penning..

 

Moonie

Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on September 13, 2010 12:11:23 AM Report
I think dreams become all the more important when love lies on a distant shore. This is lovley. Sweet dreams, Cindy. ML
Comment By: FreeAndrew on February 26, 2010 04:48:00 PM Report
and who would not welcome such a dream, so full of beauty and grace?  beautiful in its multiple dimensions....
Comment By: FreeMichael Salyers on October 23, 2009 02:02:31 PM Report
Awwwww what a wonderful place this is on those rare occassions we find it in that state just between sleep and wakening from a dream. A utopic little world where we all would reside if we could. I love the way your words painted the image of that place. It is something I have always wanted to do but never could quite find the words.... Bueatiful, STUNNING work here!
Comment By: FreeRobin Ansley on May 30, 2007 03:23:57 PM Report
I believe that dreams are what shape our futures!!! this is a very good write and I enjoyed much!!

Alwayz Smile,

Robin :)

Comment By: PremiumCliffton Clay Cromberg on November 6, 2006 09:56:05 PM Report
Cindy, You are too much! This took my breath away!

Our dreams we make our own! Only to be shared with others who otherwise would never know! This was such a beautiful dream! From a wonderful writer who sit it free, on butterfly wings she flew to me! How lovely to see! How lovely,  Clay TheWolf...

Comment By: FreeMark S. Valence on April 5, 2006 11:56:48 PM Report
Dreams are windows that we use to look into the future. My dream says you're going to have a great future. Good write Ms Cindy Bendel!
Comment By: FreeArt on February 28, 2006 02:57:38 PM Report
Sweet, very sweet. You express your feelings so well in this one...

Art
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 22, 2006 12:28:19 PM Report
CINDY
DEAR LADY WHAT A VERY ROMANTIC POEM OF DREAMS THAT WE ALL HAVE .. THIS PICTURE SETS THE POEM WITH STYLE AND GRACE.. HUGS ~ SHE
Comment By: Freelilac on February 21, 2006 05:11:53 PM Report
ooooohhhhh this is soooo beautiful!!! and the picture, and the butterfly....awwww!!!
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on February 17, 2006 01:34:58 PM Report
Warm and loving and beautifully written Cindy, Joe
Comment By: FreeTessa on February 17, 2006 10:46:49 AM Report
Lovely write.
Tessa
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on February 16, 2006 04:01:40 PM Report
You have woven a very strong ambience here twixt your words.

Lovely Penning Cindy.

Best wishes,
Pamela
Comment By: FreeLubaina on February 14, 2006 02:31:34 PM Report
This is good work... It's different, but that's great. I like it a lot, keep it up!!
Lubs.
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on February 13, 2006 08:32:19 AM Report
Wonderful expression of love Cindy... This write was very soothing and peaceful. Henry
Comment By: FreeDr Psycho on February 13, 2006 08:04:37 AM Report
I used to dream, but now....my nights are filled with the aches and pains of very long days....good write.....Paul
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on February 12, 2006 01:05:28 AM Report
Cindy this is wonderful; I truly enjoyed reading it.
Damon
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on February 11, 2006 02:18:10 PM Report
Soothing write, Cindy~ You lull the reader into the sense of sleep and dream, and it was beautifully said~
Enjoyable read~

Margaret~
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Comment By: Freeb doneff on February 11, 2006 07:41:34 AM Report
Very pretty and soft..Barbie
Comment By: FreeZoya Zaidi on February 11, 2006 05:47:11 AM Report
Wow Cindy, that is cute, and the picture off sets the text so beautifully; a perfect gift to CP on the eve of St. Valentine's Day.
((((hugs))))
Love,xxx, Zoya




 


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