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Author Name: Freebluefish 2 Comments
Date Added: February 05, 2006 14:02:41 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Preemptions In Thin Circles

 

 

 

the mouse prophesied

by running in thin circles

my letters scampered

tiles on the drab floorboards

 as the windows

sang with wind.

no mater how

i may press my vision on the glass

still this present darkness

does not lapse.

 

it is strange to think

of the spine tapping

on something beyond sight

but i glimpse

 i catch a rising hairs

of shadows

slipping down a world

foreboding latter days .

 

for the mouse cannot spell

or understand the science of

sentient sentences  as its arcs across the spaces

soundless and sightless

predispose a mystery beyond logic

likewise i a mouse proverbial

sightless run

in the wilderness

of my frailties

and still the hearth is warmth

comforts  a gift from that which lies beyond me

as invisible visions

swarm around outside of my preemptions

humility awaits for me to turn  away…

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on February 10, 2006 04:06:26 PM Report
Andrew~
May that warmth be there when in doubt..nothing wrong with being comfortable with what you have\do..
Good write my friend~
(*Moon~
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 5, 2006 07:05:37 PM Report
ANDREW, OH --MY FRIEND HOW I HAVE MISSED YOUR POEMS..((LOVE THIS...i a mouse proverbial

sightless run

in the wilderness

of my frailties

and still the hearth is warmth

comforts a gift from that which lies beyond me

as invisible visions

swarm around outside of my preemptions

humility awaits for me to turn away…
GREAT TO SEE YOU WRITING AGAIN..
HUGS ~ SHE




 


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