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Author Name: Freedeep thinker 5 Comments
Date Added: February 03, 2006 09:02:55 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Fallen Hero

Standing up,

Being proud,

Fighting hard,

Death all around.

Bombs exploding,

Planes flying,

Guns shot,

Soldiers dying.

Running hard,

Praying fast,

Hiding out,

Scars that last.

Pain Begins,

It goes dark,

Hit the ground,

Leave a mark.

Soliders come,

Knock on the door,

Bad news,

Your world is tore.

Cry a lot,

Tears for the brave,

Go and put,

The flag on his grave.

Think about him,

Everyday,

Pray for God,

To take all the pain away.

Say a silent prayer,

For all the fighters,

And cry a tear,

For the fallen heros.

Author's Notes:
My big brother is in iraq, and as much as i dont want to think about it he might not come home so this is for the heros that  have fallen and for those who are to come. let my know what you think.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreePiper Reeves on May 8, 2006 09:27:00 AM Report
Amazing write, Ashley, beautifully written.
Comment By: FreeAshley Marrie on April 12, 2006 12:48:06 AM Report
i like this.. very good write.. everyone over seas is on our minds so is the facts behind it... i hope your brother makes it well... as do i hope everyone makes it home...
always and forevers
ashley marrie
Comment By: FreexXxCaution, Hazardous to selfxXx on February 4, 2006 10:03:20 PM Report
awww makes me wanna cry *once again* of all the poems ash this is prolly ur best on here!! i love it very much, you've done an extremely well job on it and don't worry Seth will be back soon so that we can bug the heck out of him once we get done crying!! love ya chicady!

-Tater
Comment By: FreeNicholas Ryan on February 3, 2006 10:53:26 AM Report
Thats really good, and really sweet of you too write that bout your brother, Looks like you and him get along, IM happy for you,and he will come home..safe..and unharmed..really well written, and really well expressed, about ppl that fight in iraq.
♥ nick
Comment By: FreeGraham Jones on February 3, 2006 09:26:13 AM Report
A good poem with a lot of pace,I hope your brother keeps safe and well.




 


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