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Date Added: February 01, 2006 21:02:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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In Dreams

 

This mind's eye drew to a slit long ago.
Coated by scale of joy and sorrow,
Through cataracts were dim days ahead.
Yet on one fateful occasion, I dared to dream.

Hidden in this transient landscape,
Where each step reverberates with reality,
There might be one gem, fit to last forever.
Dreams, the fumes of life, move me along.

Who deserves what is unimaginable?
Venturing forward, I sailed toward my dream.
As some gems lost luster on close approach,
One burned still brighter to be realized.

Through a complete cycle around the sky,
I recognized you, alone, in dreams.
Found your heart so strong and true.
In brightest sun, my dreams persist of you.
 

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Written 1/2/06.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeHelen on January 20, 2009 06:05:51 PM Report
....Who deserves what is unimaginable?

...Yet on one fateful occasion I dared to dream...

Comment By: FreeAngel on May 18, 2008 10:55:27 AM Report
Beautiful

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeLubaina on September 24, 2006 03:45:16 AM Report
Delightful tone, speaking volumes...  love it...

*Blessed* you've been branded
*Exclusive write*Thanks for sharing.
Lubs

Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on March 9, 2006 07:15:49 PM Report
Ooooooohhh.. Heady stuff, Rich,,IT's never tto kate to dreaam, buddy..A human without some sort of dream is just passing datss until the end..Very thoughtful...You never told me you were smart!!..Who wudda thunk??...Yer pal, len
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on February 13, 2006 08:04:03 PM Report
Sometimes...I believe...I know...we go further than our dreaming. And these dream really FEEL different...you just wake up KNOWING it was not a typical dream. Well, the only way besides tracking down the person you met in lalaland, and hoping they remember...which CAN happen :)

GREAT poem Rich :)

Pamela


Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on February 12, 2006 10:18:18 PM Report
I sit here in a hushed state of poetical holiness...you are amazing Richard. Amazing Awesome Astounding...how do you write like that?

Awe struck I am

~Cindy
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on February 2, 2006 08:52:43 PM Report
RICHARD, THIS LADY WHO OWNS YOUR HEART.. I FEEL SO MUCH LOVE FOR HER STILL...PERHAPS SOME DAY SHE WILL REALIZE WHAT SHE LOST..HUGS ~SCARLETT
Comment By: FreeGlata on February 2, 2006 07:52:03 AM Report
I hope your gem never loses her gleam! Hold her close and cherish her, Richard...
Beautiful write....
Glata
Comment By: Freeb doneff on February 1, 2006 10:27:36 PM Report
On now, this..is one dandy of a dream! Loved that last verse! Yep..I see winner all lll over this little beauty! barbie
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on February 1, 2006 09:33:01 PM Report
No matter when, or how, that one can come shining through with the brightest of lights, true~ We follow them in dreams and then bump into them in reality~ This is an exceptional piece of poetry, Rich, one that the reader may enjoy with zeal~

Margaret....
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Comment By: FreeRebeca Weiss on February 1, 2006 09:27:18 PM Report
Mr. Rich,
A very sweet write. Honest and well written. I truly enjoyed this. :0)
~Beca




 


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