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Author Name: Freebjb 3 Comments
Date Added: October 16, 2002 19:10:49 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Open up to Me
Take me by the hand and lead me down

I'll take the other and spin us around

Tunneling to the very depths of your soul

'til we're dizzy & screaming out of control.



Then take your hand, move it back to my face

Then I'll whisper "Don't let me leave this place"

Time will stand still as you're lost in my eyes

Through perfect kisses and most revitalizing sighs.



Then you'd realize every moment could be like this

If you could only open up to me and you'd steal that kiss

Be able to take it, instead of wishing it would be...

You have to conquer yourself before you can see.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeNichole on April 25, 2007 09:36:02 PM Report
Lovely write. A must needed addition to my favorites. I really enjoyed this.
Comment By: FreeJessica on March 28, 2007 07:23:07 PM Report
Awww this is lovely. I expecially enjoyed the imagery in this poem!

 

Jess

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on June 4, 2004 12:15:14 AM Report
Hey Bobby,
You need 'open' in the second line, last verse. It's needed for the unity of the poem.

Making that first move is often the hardest step.

Lovely write! =))

~Barbara~





 


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