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Author Name: TrialAnn 4 Comments
Date Added: December 20, 2005 18:12:15 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Priceless Gift


The frantic crowd bustles by,
eyes searching--oh elusive gift.
Where can you be? Their footsteps
utter the drone of duty.
Hurrying past me, I stand alone
watching snowflakes fall
across their frozen steps.

Destinations undone,
they fumble for the shiny
bauble that will make all perfect
and you come up from behind me,
fingers touching my cheek in 'hello'
and I understand the message
of the priceless gift.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on February 6, 2006 02:37:35 PM Report
Short and sweet, Ann.

It is amazing how you've condensed this lesson so well...and retained such beaty at once.

Nicely said... :)

Pamela
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on December 30, 2005 01:12:37 AM Report
It is evident to me that the most precious gifts are not those that are purchased. This poem says that in a most refreshing way.

I like the length of this piece, it presents all it has to without any extra clutter! Good work!

~Barbara~
Comment By: FreeElizabeth on December 21, 2005 12:26:54 AM Report
:-)
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on December 20, 2005 06:55:45 PM Report
And thank goodness for it. Very nice, Ann. ML




 


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