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Author Name: FreeWind Whisperer 6 Comments
Date Added: November 06, 2005 13:11:38 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Loves Passion (Monchielle)

Loves passion holds me tight
Whilst we dance 'neath the moon
I'm surrounded by love
We gaze at the water
Given from God above.

Loves passion holds me tight
As I feel a tear slip
He brushes it away
Remembering first kiss
He gave to me that day.

Loves passion holds me tight
While we are making love
Silk bed sheets cover us
The sun peers through windows
Your kiss leaves me breathless.

Loves passion holds me tight
Before he says goodbye
Quickly as the wind blew
You were gone from my arms
I knew our love was through.


Author's Notes:

Thank you Pamela for the challenge. Sheesh, this was hard.

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Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on November 15, 2005 08:01:01 PM Report
Cynthia: how did I miss this one? Very nicely done.

Lady Dragonwyck
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on November 7, 2005 05:51:36 AM Report
OOps of course I had a typo..... MONCHIELLE. Sorry about that!
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on November 7, 2005 05:49:41 AM Report
This is absolutely AWESOME. Utterly delightful and written with your beautiful pen, perfect in word choice, and rhythm. our first line is a perfect choice. Strong and steady and truly carries the Monichelle with grace and beauty. Excellent work. ~Pam
Comment By: FreeMichael on November 6, 2005 09:14:47 PM Report
a wonderful poem...thank you
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on November 6, 2005 05:52:56 PM Report
Wow,very did great for a challenge.
Way to go my friend!!
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on November 6, 2005 01:51:49 PM Report
Wow~! What a spectacular poem, Wind Whisperer~! Delicate look at Love in the onset and the love and then the ending~!
Whatever you had to do to accomplish the feat, it was a treat for us to read...
Margaret...the old bag friend


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