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Author Name: FreeBlushing_female_387 8 Comments
Date Added: October 29, 2005 02:10:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Behind Her SMile Can You See Her Tears

Behind her smile she cries

because inside her heart it dies

no one sees the pain they cause

because they are too buisy hidding their own flaws

broken down and ready to scream

but on the outside it may seam

she has no worries she has no cares

but look in her eyes and see her pain is there

invisable tears roll down her face

as to catch and hole every happy look she makes

no one sees her cry at night

as she holds on to the light

of her happy times they are so rare

no one even knows they're there

so next time before you point and befor you stare

look to see if the pain is there

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Comments:
Comment By: FreePreshess on October 13, 2006 04:46:33 PM Report
amazing ...  thats all i have to say..

 

            writers block on a comment..

 

 as a compliment your peom gave me writers block..

 

 

lol...

              Real in Unreal circumstances

                          -Preshess

Comment By: FreeKarina on May 7, 2006 02:40:25 PM Report
I feel like this poem is me. I feel as if you wrote about me, my story. The pain is real and no one sees, right?
Comment By: Freeterri on December 2, 2005 10:26:08 AM Report
This is a beautiful poem. Good write. Unfortunately, people don't see the pain because they are too busy or don't care to stop and look at the person they are hurting.
Comment By: Freeterri on December 2, 2005 10:24:49 AM Report

Comment By: FreeJami Renae on November 3, 2005 06:18:49 PM Report
wow This is how I feel...but I have alot of friends but My bf just broke up w/ me and if only he knew how much he hurt me maybe just maybe he would say sorry....I love this poem!
Comment By: FreeKel on October 30, 2005 10:12:38 PM Report
Thats really good...i like it. kel
Comment By: FreeJess on October 30, 2005 06:42:01 PM Report
this poem is wonderful
great write
xoJessox
Comment By: FreeH. Louise on October 29, 2005 06:13:11 AM Report
Good write.
You've written it well.
Keep up the good work ^___^
xHannahx




 


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