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Author Name: FreeBlueyd553 5 Comments
Date Added: October 07, 2005 20:10:16 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Two Sons

 

Jonathan

Bursting forth on Sunday's lap
Hungry are his cries for mother's breast
And counted fingers are inventoried
As shouts of deliverance renders
Boyish charm at rapid pace
Thy precious newness in arms's clasp
Finding each step on uncharted path
Kept company with good book of verse
Ever closer you came to flight
And kissed the cheek of something dear

David

David  beauty of my youth
Birthed upon an open river
Flowing from our hearts
Quickened at the sound of peace
Softly landing on our shore
Placid and cool are your waters
Deliberate by plan; and unaware
You register healing
A sudden ripple
To a cove of deep despair


Author's Notes:

For Jonathan...first born and leader, strong you stand
                    For David....healer of our pain, a sweet balm of goodness
                               
I love you both

I wish to acknowledge Sherry Emily and SEA_Siggys for the lovely artwork.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLinda Jo on September 6, 2010 08:59:54 PM Report
your Jonathan, like my firstborn shares a love for a "good book and verse"..for his first sleep-over he packed a volume of the encyclopedia in his bag just in case he got bored...funny, his name is Jonathan too.   I loved the line in David's poem, "birthed upon an open river"...and the lines that flowed with a feeling of peace.  Both dedications are simply beautiful...and moving!  ♥   Your David would be my Lucas. 
Comment By: Freemaggie lopez sherry wilbur on July 28, 2009 01:28:54 PM Report
I too have two sons Diego and Romeo and It truely is as you put it except my boys ae backwards here. my oldest is the more senseitive one and the youngest the stronger.  This is a beautiful dedication and they could not have a better mother to love them so much. Always Maggie.
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on March 16, 2006 07:29:01 PM Report
Beautifully written for your two sons. I am sure that they both appreciate the sentiments expressed here. I know that I would have if my Mother had written something like this for me, but I might not have told her that I did. I enjoyed the read very much my friend.
Damon
Comment By: PremiumJoe McNinney on October 8, 2005 04:28:51 PM Report
Beautiful write and dedication Cindy, Joe
Comment By: FreeEdward Kent on October 8, 2005 04:26:07 PM Report
I love this Cindy, the love you have for your children comes over very strong,I salute you ,,hugs Eddy




 


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