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Author Name: FreeShe Whispers 7 Comments
Date Added: September 25, 2005 10:09:42 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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~* Silent Reflections *~

 

Her  dreams only got worse instead of better …
At night when she closed her tired wet eyes,
She again in her mind, She read his final letter


At night She became….

A woman with long black  raven hair, other times,
She was a scarlet searching raven that flew only  at midnight,

in the cool autmn whispering air

 

Then other times.....


She was a  rageing Black silver mare , with eyes of emerald gold
and snorting  flames with out a care

She tried to block out the trembling changing dreams,
She  prayed  herself to finally sleep, in  swirling shapes
and  colored sheens


She  made herself a  silver cross to clutch in the  lingering
whispers, of nights gloomy weather
She just couldn’t forget the final words, in his last letter

 

The effects of these’s dream caused  her emotions
to ebb and flow, without warning, he had let her go

 In a heart beat  her female mind , was in  turbulant  rage,
 to suddenly,  gentle pleading with her love,
Him,
She was really  wanting and needing

She was struggling to rise above ….
black  horse stamped one foot soundlessly, with love

Suddenly the demon lost its coherent shape, becoming
once again the swirling mist of a lingering shadow above

 

This final vision faded, leaving only  the reflection of his face...

What did  he have to fear from a crying womans’s eyes?

 

It only took him an elusive moment to realize, it was not
the twilight scarlets  changing  fire, that lit his  sky


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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on September 25, 2005 07:39:25 PM Report
Wow!! what a write. Beautiful story telling India.
Great job. Linda
Comment By: Freetom on September 25, 2005 02:50:02 PM Report
I love this! The picture is perfect along with the poem.
Terrific write India!
hugs kisses
tom

Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on September 25, 2005 02:24:06 PM Report
Oh pretty person, this is absolutely beautiful, yet so deep and sad. U said so much more in your' poem than what u wrote. I hope this is not how u truly feel. I am always here for u sis, anytime u need to talk. Your' talent is displayed so clearly within this write...Love, Tiger Rose
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on September 25, 2005 01:41:18 PM Report
VELVET RAVEN
YOUR TRUE GIFT HAS COME SHINNING THRU WITH YOUR WORDS. I LOVE THIS.
yours ........BLUE WOLF
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on September 25, 2005 01:12:50 PM Report
Dear India(She)
In the midnight sky under a watchful eye
Above the screams below hear an angel sigh
She tries to spread her winds but can not fly
But she finds the strength to continue to try-
I too liked the image that the words paint into
the readers mind in this-
Hope all is well for you and the tempest still
allows peace to flourish in your soul-
Best Wishes to You and Yours My Friend~
Peace~
James
Comment By: FreeKarl Berry on September 25, 2005 12:45:02 PM Report
This poem just hit me in my heart....
I like this poem! ...Patch.....!
Comment By: on September 25, 2005 12:43:12 PM Report
India~
I do love this! The picture is lovely along with the poem.
Terrific write Lady!
Hugs and much love~
(*Moon~




 


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