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Author Name: Adminrich53 27 Comments
Date Added: September 23, 2005 16:09:05 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Frozen in Amber


 

 


Crystallized is each priceless moment,
Timeless measures of feeling that we shared.
Frozen in amber, bled by a heart in torment.
Clutched so tight I can only be ensnared.

Peering within, at the enigma of her,
Vivid, alive, she reigns in places we knew.
With a promise to relive any second tender,
The power of her eyes draws me within.

No longer seen through sad, longing eyes,
Instantly clear the joy she did impart.
Facing, joining hands, no more good-byes,
Walking forever in the forest of my heart.

Frozen in amber, clear and soft as the dew,
My choice to remain where visions linger of we two.


 

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Comment By: FreeJohn Armlovich on January 18, 2012 10:59:49 PM Report


wow, this is amazing, I do think this is one of my favorite poems that I have read on this sight. thanks for keeping a place where someone like me can write poetry and have them enjoyed by more people than the ones in my mind. thank you very much,


John

Comment By: FreeLeila on April 19, 2010 11:36:21 PM Report
Hi,

Sorry for my lacking of knowledge, why the second stanza differs from the others?

 

Regards

leila 

Comment By: PremiumRaymond Pinsonneault on October 20, 2008 12:16:06 PM Report
"where visions linger of we two" a very good write Rick..Loved it

ps my poem "timelessness" a little different than yours. I mentioned would be posted , is done. check it out, let me know what you think.

Comment By: Freesaman on August 27, 2008 02:31:11 PM Report
yes...thats how memories linger ans stay as warm, as fresh as ever...ripple timelessly for someone so cherished ..its a new world within.
Comment By: FreeTara on June 5, 2008 02:49:48 AM Report
Beautiful.
Comment By: FreeJose Noriega on April 12, 2008 04:59:56 PM Report
wonderful poem so lovely
Comment By: Freeoliver michael barrett on April 12, 2008 04:35:48 PM Report
theres my man.

way to go rich.

great choice of words.

 

sometimes i felt a little lost.

these words were very discriptive.

but some readers could get caught up in them.

most writers would understand.

but your readers are your audience.

 

all in all, it was awesome.

good love story.

 

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on December 1, 2005 01:36:25 AM Report
These are tender, beautiful expressions...this poem is a product of deep emotions. I agree with Bruce Peaslee below...memories of a great love are always bittersweet.

~Barbara~
Comment By: FreeWhite Dragon on November 30, 2005 08:59:22 AM Report
This is such a wonderful poem. So loving and soothing.

White Dragon
Comment By: FreeBruce A. Peaslee on November 4, 2005 07:44:37 AM Report
Rich- Would that we could share this with all that has lost a loved one, in such a way as to reduce the heartache of losing a loved one.This is a beatiful way of expressing that bittersweet moment when grief ends and soothing memories take over. Good work sir.

---Poetrydad---

Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on October 21, 2005 02:34:41 PM Report
Oh, my. I feel trapped like a deer in headlights. How is it, do you suppose, that love so engrosses us that even its memory controls our minds? Breathlessly beautiful, so real its scary, and darn well done. ML
Comment By: Freeevan on October 16, 2005 03:09:12 AM Report
very beautiful. but yet, i found a slight ammount of stress in it, you know like when you go some place beautiful and you know you evenutually have to leave, but absolutely lovely poem all the same.
Comment By: FreeRyan on October 13, 2005 08:57:30 AM Report
Sorry im late commenting, i've only just got back on this site pretty much! lol, a wonderful poem, dunno why but it reminds me of a place i love to sit down and think in, i can share my secrets with this place...

Thank you for reminding me of it, its my second home to me

A great and lovely write

~Ryan~
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 11, 2005 03:59:40 PM Report
RICH,
THIS POEM REALLY IS A CLASSIC..I TRULY LOVE THIS POEM ..IT MOVES ME IN SUCH A STRANGE WAY ..IT BREATHLESS.. HUGS AND LOVE ~ SHE
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on October 11, 2005 11:41:26 AM Report
beautiful title and wonderful poignant poem.
Things frozen in Amber are their for millions of years...
Ali Crystal Healer x
Comment By: FreeJeff on October 7, 2005 02:59:53 PM Report
Loved the picture and loved the poem.
Excellent work!

Jeff
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on October 5, 2005 03:18:41 PM Report
Beautiful heartfelt write. Frozen in amber leaves good images and served your write well.
Comment By: FreeKarl Berry on October 5, 2005 01:19:02 PM Report
I really think this poem speaks for itself. Nice write!....Patch....!
Comment By: FreeRodney Lacy on October 5, 2005 11:32:28 AM Report
Thiz Poemz Real Nice... I lyk Tha Way You Put It
That Crazy Loc
Rodney
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on October 4, 2005 05:10:38 PM Report
What a beautifully penned piece Rich. Well done. Thank you for saving the site and helping our friendships and family of C-P stay together as one. :o) *S* Wind Whisperer
Comment By: FreeWhiteOwl on October 4, 2005 08:26:44 AM Report
very pretty ~
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on October 3, 2005 11:31:15 PM Report
Sorry I'm a little late in commenting. A love so strong yet so tender and soft as to be remembered so clear.
Gentle Dove
Comment By: FreeGlata on September 26, 2005 08:49:11 AM Report
Ah Rich...you've a romantic soul within, don't you?
This is great!
Glata
Comment By: FreeEdward Kent on September 24, 2005 02:43:28 PM Report
fantastic I loved every stanza,,my hats deffinitly off to you,,,,
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on September 24, 2005 03:37:51 AM Report
Amber is fosilized tree sap, right?..This may be sappy, but it are good..Lovely images, Kevlar.....TP
Comment By: FreeCindy Bendel on September 23, 2005 06:16:01 PM Report
What a precious way to capture such loving sentiments. I am awed by this piece..lovely to partake of such beauty and soulfulness. ~Cindy
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on September 23, 2005 05:01:55 PM Report
Outstanding~!
Such gentle lines, and the frozen in amber title is so 'there'~ Your work is always a joy to tap upon, as it is exquisite~
Margaret...




 


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