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Comment By:  Michelle on May 29, 2007 12:46:36 AM |
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ah, beautiful! And I love haikus :)
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| Comment By: Candice on May 16, 2007 04:52:14 PM |
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nice haiku. fall is beautiful season. |
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| Comment By: Goliath Assassin on February 4, 2007 01:14:30 AM |
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Now there's a man with a passion for autumn!
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| Comment By: Barbara Demasson on September 29, 2006 12:11:59 AM |
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This is one Haiku that doesn't have a single wasted word. Very, very nice! =))
~Barbara~
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| Comment By: Pelagic Mind on July 15, 2006 10:23:18 AM |
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Hahahahaha... Great Rich, the sound does bring a different texture to the piece...
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| Comment By: WhiteOwl on October 18, 2005 09:05:44 PM |
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Very nice!
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| Comment By: Leonard Wilson on October 16, 2005 10:52:30 PM |
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Hey...You got the right amount of silly bulls and everything. THis is much better than most haikus I've read..The beauty of Fall, and an expression of passion, in very few lines..Here's one of mine, Rich..
Your nut in a vice
May cause your face to contort
As the pecan cracks...len
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| Comment By: Ryan on October 15, 2005 07:49:48 PM |
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Ah another late comment! well better then none i suppose :)
For your first Haiku it was very beautiful, To be honest i don't have any Haikus soon i hope i will =)
A great Haiku reminded me of a Japanese warlord poem i read
~Ryan~
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| Comment By: Samantha Firefly on October 7, 2005 02:13:07 PM |
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This is very nice.
Samantha.
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| Comment By: Roger Bacon on October 5, 2005 03:15:41 PM |
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You never know what those little leaves will inspire. Nice haiku Richard.
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| Comment By: Cynthia Jones on September 25, 2005 09:26:53 PM |
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Nicely penned Rich. I can't seem to see the pic though. *S* Wind Whisperer
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| Comment By: Samantha Firefly on September 14, 2005 07:02:11 AM |
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Very nice poem. I like the picture too.
Samantha.
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| Comment By: The Bag Lady on September 14, 2005 02:27:13 AM |
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Beautifully said, Richard, and presented with the lovely leaf pic~ This is a new Haiku count for me~ I will have to investigate....Loved it~!
Margaret...the bag lady
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