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Author Name: Adminrich53 8 Comments
Date Added: September 11, 2005 22:09:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Lost Words




Parading, softly last night in dreams,
Moving images, you and I in an unimaginable place.
Beautiful feelings, wonderful emotions kept stride,
Organizing themselves into delicate passages falling by.

Pausing, finding the rhymes within so beautiful,
Unwilling to move, I lay suspended within the dream.
Reciting the words over and over somehow to remember,
Wanting the rare dream to flow on and on forever.

So much more together we must have shared,
Since a contented, peaceful sleep I did find.
Awakened, I found you left with all the lost words.
Yet the feeling of you in my arms lingered on and on.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeRyan on December 5, 2005 10:43:29 AM Report
A beautiful write, images I got were amazing and peaceful :) thank you for sharing this with us.

~Ryan~
Comment By: FreeAmelie on November 2, 2005 10:28:48 PM Report
hi... first i want to let you know that i truly appreciate your site :) the picture chosen to set your poem is enigmatic, peaceful... well it is for me ;) very beautiful... it complements the laid back, soothing words of your expression... the overall feeling i get from your poem, is a sensation of well-being, a contented moment, shared in love... its sincerely beautiful... i very much enjoyed as it brought a sighing smile to me right now... thanks for sharing this :f

later... xx

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on October 17, 2005 01:04:38 AM Report
Dreams like this are as good as reality. The image here gives a peaceful cast to this post...complimenting the dreamstate you speak of so endearingly.

Splendid work Rich! =))

~Barbara~
Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on October 13, 2005 05:40:17 PM Report
This is beautifully penneded Rich. I was lost in the scerenity and romance. U painted a beautiful picture with your' words. Very well penned my friend...Hugz...Jillian
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 11, 2005 03:56:12 PM Report
RICH, THIS IS SO VERY BREATHTAKING TO READ ..OH THE DREAMS WE ALL HAVE TO JUST HOLD THEM AS LONG AS WE CAN.. THIS IS SO LOVELY TO READ MY FRIEND.. CONTINUE YOUR SEARCH ..ITS CLOSER THAN YOU THINK... ALWAYS ~ SHE
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on September 22, 2005 09:08:05 PM Report
Great dream piece, Rich.Put me in an alpha state, just reading this lovely and romantic piece..I LIKE it!...len
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on September 18, 2005 10:37:07 PM Report
Richard...such lovely images within your lines and on your presentation~ Your write takes us upon an ethereal journey that you share with us~ It is a mesmerizing piece, I loved it~
Margaret....the Bag Lady
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on September 13, 2005 08:24:31 AM Report
Magical, wonderful dreamland. "So much more together." Beautiful work, Rich. ML




 


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