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Author Name: Freebluefish 4 Comments
Date Added: September 02, 2005 14:09:28 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Forgotten Dreams

Often i walk

Across fields

Through the spells of long grasses

That touch beyond skin

Weave beyond thought

Chant beyond the chance of ear..

 

Grace is not found within

How i hunt it

A strange little creature

Beauty How far you roam.

My body is no longer capable

Of following the suggestion

of your possible trails.

How the locks of hair curl in wind

Whisper in tangles that keep

Other away like orphan fences.

 

Find boundaries

Word strands

Beyond sight.

Tussled for they know

A creature with darker habits

Awaits, Paw pads

Far different naming

then the one

i am seeking’

 

It is stalking me in the prairies

of forgotten dreams

And quenches it thirst in

The murky depths

Of moon forsaken inwardness

For i am masked by own

Troll like ugliness the twist

And lack of eloquence

Mark the shadows

That keep me hidden

For my children are just dreams

Of corn fields of  alien mysteries

No one will take the time to gather

For i was meant to always wander..

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Comments:
Comment By: Freehiddendragon on September 4, 2005 07:36:08 AM Report
Lovely writing as always my dear friend.

But I think you need some new glasses dearest Andrew :o)

...for how is it that my eyes see beauty, eloquence, and sweet disposition whilst yours see a troll like creature~pah! New glasses Andrew, see to it :o)

[[Ladies...this man is an ace (don't listen to his unjust claims of trollness :o) ) ]]

Hugs,
Dragon~
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 3, 2005 01:53:48 AM Report
ANDREW, THIS IS AWESOME AS USUAL.. I HAVE MISSED YOUR DEEP THOUGHTS.. GREAT POEM MY FRIEND ~ ALWAYS ~ SHE
Comment By: on September 2, 2005 03:14:22 PM Report
Andrew~
Haunting,sad write..but penned so well,as always.
The last two stanza's are so good!
Hope you dont have to 'wander'for too long..
Nice write,thank you.
(*Moon~

Comment By: Freesarahtiger10000 on September 2, 2005 02:18:15 PM Report
this is really good!




 


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