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Author Name: FreeDamon 11 Comments
Date Added: August 25, 2005 23:08:49 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Itís Goodbye
Itís goodbye I see.There will be no more hugs or kisses for me.My love is wasted.Your love is gone.Your love I tastedóBefore you moved on.
Author's Notes:
When I was at a local restaurant eating breakfast yesterday, I saw several people hugging goodbye. That scene brought this poem to mind.
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Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on March 4, 2006 11:34:30 PM Report
Goodbye is simply goodbye and LOVE given is NEVER wasted when it comes from the heart. A wonderful scent to stir the verse. LOVED it. ~Pam
Comment By: FreeLiquid Poetess on February 25, 2006 03:26:05 AM Report
The strength behind these sentences is overwhelming, and I love that you got inspired so esily to write this..

Liquid Poetess :)
Comment By: FreeMeg on January 16, 2006 09:15:22 PM Report
Sentences soeak volumes;). How sad goodbyes can be, yet beautiful in the way they touch us. Thank you for sharing this.
XOXO Cheerios XOXO
Meg
Comment By: FreeVictoria on October 4, 2005 01:24:02 PM Report
Much said in few words. Good job.
Comment By: FreeKeri on August 28, 2005 03:11:43 PM Report
It's rather amazing what will inspire poetry...and I'd say this scene was definitely inspirational. Very well written.

~Keri~
Comment By: FreeSouthernStar on August 27, 2005 04:40:51 PM Report
You did a good job with this piece.
It is sad yet sweet at the same time if that makes any sence....LOL

keep up the good work
star
Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on August 27, 2005 07:13:27 AM Report
Damon, this is a very good write. Well penned. *S* Wind Whisperer
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on August 26, 2005 07:56:20 PM Report
A bittersweet goodbye. Well done, Damon. ML
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on August 26, 2005 12:34:44 PM Report
Well, I am glad that it is not about you, my friend....I love people~ I am a 'people watcher'~ Enjoyed the read, Damon~
Margaret....
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 26, 2005 10:33:08 AM Report
DAMON,
THIS IS VERY TRUE...SOMETIMES WE JUST HAVE TO SAY GOODBYE.. FRIENDS ~ SHE
Comment By: Freepainandlove on August 26, 2005 12:10:04 AM Report
Short but sweet...I like it




 


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