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Author Name: Adminrich53 10 Comments
Date Added: August 08, 2005 19:08:15 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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My Walls Just Fall Away

She reaches out at midnight.
Looking deep inside my eyes.
Over so much distance.
My thoughts are her insight.
 
She's doesn't know,
What power surrounds her...
Everyday.
Through mists she explores me,
She finds the way.
She wakes up my heart.
Wakes up my soul.
She makes all my walls just fall away.
Her words wake my heart.
Words shakes my soul.
She makes my walls just simply fade away.

No prophet am I.
But to listen what you taught.
You say what you require,
No cloud this time to wrap your thought.

Sun-like vision.
In deep blue and green…
Our flesh entangled.
Sweet vortices of love,
Kiss our skin.
Our hearts meet.
Our souls touch
You make all our walls just fall away.
Your voice wakes my heart.
Voice shakes my soul.
You make our walls just simply fade away.
 
Current your desire.
Flickering light forgiveness.
Brought together.
Conjured in your sleeping mind.
 
The sunrise awaits you,
Now precious one...
Awake so free.
I crave to escort you,
Through all your dreams.
You stir up this heart.
Stir up this soul.
You make all my walls just fall away.
Your voice wakes my heart.
Voice shakes my soul.
You make my walls just simply fade away.

Author's Notes:
Inspired by someone exquisite and Collective Soul's "She Gathers Rain".
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on April 23, 2010 06:04:50 PM Report
A very strong delivery and so well penned, Richard...You never told me you were a poet.. :o)...len
Comment By: FreeWide Awake on February 13, 2006 08:23:00 PM Report
Another beauty Richard...along those same lines...

This is lovely, dare I say dreamy? Well it is possessed of this quality, to mine ear, heart.

Best wishes,
Pamela
Comment By: FreeJENNIFER HOBBS on October 6, 2005 08:59:48 PM Report
SIMPLY A BEAUTIFUL WRITE....I LOVE IT!..:)
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on September 10, 2005 02:52:35 PM Report
ok spill the beans...who is your muse???
Ali x
Comment By: Freehiddendragon on August 10, 2005 08:33:41 PM Report
Wow, Richard this is simply gorgeous...

Not only filled with heartwarming delivery of feelings but such elegance, it is truly breathtaking...

Wonderful poetry weaver you are!

Best wishes,
Dragon~
Comment By: FreeJ on August 10, 2005 09:21:41 AM Report
Simply beautiful. Music has a strange ability to inspire and I'm glad it got you. Your words flow so smoothly and the message is clear. Great write.
Comment By: FreeGlata on August 9, 2005 09:35:30 AM Report
Sounds like a love song from the very depths of the soul, Rich! This is beautiful...She's touched you deeply, it is clear. Best to you both!
Hugs...
Glata
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on August 8, 2005 08:55:40 PM Report
RICH
WOW--- THIS HAS GOT TO BE ONE OF YOUR BEST LOVE POEMS ... THIS WOMAN WHO GATHERS THE RAIN... SHE SOUNDS LIKE SOMEONE YOU MUST HAVE IN YOUR LIFE??? THIS POEM REALLY MOVED MY HEART IN SUCH A STRANGE WAY??? I WILL PRINT THIS AND READ AGAIN AT WORK...JUST BEAUTIFUL MY DEAR FRIEND...ALWAYS HUGS ~ SHE
Comment By: Freeb doneff on August 8, 2005 08:45:18 PM Report
Bowl me over, once again Rich! What a blessing to be so inspired. The title of this drew me in, and the rest, well, just fell into place among the rubble of your walls. Wonderful. Barbie
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on August 8, 2005 08:09:26 PM Report
Very tender write. You are fortunate to be inspired by such an exquisite person.




 


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