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Author Name: Freeikoli 3 Comments
Date Added: July 28, 2005 10:07:19 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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the race
The race with no end,
Mine has begun.
Ahead  many chasing a prize,
None will claim their own.
A race without rules,
A taken short-cut, a step backward.
A race with no end,
Aligned,Arrayed, Arranged?Nope.
Like sea men in a sinking vessel,
Order is not of the essence.
The fittest will survive. The strongest will last. The smartest will excel. This race will not end. Consequences will be felt in this  race without an  end
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Comment By: FreeSoulfulPoeticKing on December 16, 2005 12:02:48 PM Report
what an amazing write..sets me out to think on what my race shall be and how i can succeed in this journey..great write to have the reader on it's feet imaging and thinking!..Keep writing..you have a great talent!
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on August 17, 2005 07:56:39 AM Report
very thought provoking and well written. Ali x
Comment By: FreeMary AnnieA.V. on August 12, 2005 04:10:53 AM Report
Hi ..this is another one tht sets me thinking.. the race will never end..coz it is carried ion from generation to generation.. no wonder its called the rat race.. well written..anna maria




 


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