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Author Name: Freebluefish 1 Comments
Date Added: July 09, 2005 13:07:17 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Be Forgotten

Sometimes the trolls

We have planted do us ill.

Spill what we have labored

In long eloquent silence.

Small they seem

Imps almost overlooked

But still the ends of our schemes

Tug at us

 first like a little kitten

On the coat tails of our consciousness.

Next insidious grasping souls skin...

 

How my integrity

Rips buttons

Words seams

Threads

Where i hear the echo of hooves

In the narrow bridges

Of my soul

Coming with horn like knowledge

 and the trolls tremble

 for days

Of supremacy over

my body are undone

tumble to another’s soul

and leave your whispering

fever be forgotten…

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Comments:
Comment By: Freehiddendragon on July 9, 2005 02:52:45 PM Report
Wow Andrew,
That was very powerful.

Interesting imagery, metaphor. :o)
"little kitten
On the coat tails of our consciousness"
&
"the echo of hooves
In the narrow bridges
Of my soul
Coming with horn like knowledge"

And the finale was very powerful :o)

Dragon~




 


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