Today Is: Tuesday, November 12, 2019 07:52 PM. Our Topic of the Week: Quagmire
Questions?

Check our Help area first!

Comments? Suggestions?

Contact us now!

We like hearing feedback from members on how to improve the site!
 
 
 


 
Author Name: Freebluefish 2 Comments
Date Added: July 08, 2005 10:07:52 Average Score: (Needs 2)
Views This Week
Members: 0
Unique Members: 0
Guests: 148
Total Views
Members: 9
Unique Members: 7
Guests: 952

Type: Unspecified
Category: General Add To Favorites | Text Only
 
Blessings Of Hooves

Little goats dance

Hop into pools of moonlight.

for you only know the

magic of milk

horns are just suggestions

just buttons that wait

 to grow out into the world

and welcome new changes

but you

tussle in the star stained hills

as your tails twirl

and you buck each other

forehead to forehead and climb

every conveyable liquid word

that you find

 with your curious hooves

flapping ears.....

still in the morning

we find you

asleep and dreaming curled with

each muzzle

placed on the haunches

of fellow dreamer

embracing and curling

newborns of days

in hay of innocence

and we the old ones

can only remember

when the moon

was a hill spelled

with unknown letters of craters

and we ate the leaves

of the sky,

drank the dew of the night

and stars just tasted simple

tender leafs that curved

in our mouths

for you are the dreams

and remembrance of paradise

hidden in harness of empty insides…

Author's Notes:
Report Offensive Poem.

'Blessings Of Hooves' Copyright © Andrew Rymill
Copyright is property of the above author or group. Reproduction in whole or in part is strictly prohibited.
Click here if you feel this poem is in violation of a copyright.
 
Click here to send this poem to someone!

Comments:
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on July 23, 2005 02:08:17 PM Report
I have to confess i am still trying to understand exactly what you are saying. I cannot comment on anything other than the feelings evoked by a poem if I do not understand it.
However, once I have deciphered your very individual style.....then their hidden treasures shall be made manifest to me.
ASW
Comment By: Freehiddendragon on July 8, 2005 10:13:45 AM Report
I liked the point you make about perceptions...once we have outgrown them, it is very hard to recapture...we are lucky to remember fleetingly the feeling of being at that point...

I enjoyed the little goat imagery. :o)

Best wishes,
Dragon~




 


Check for Announcements.
on our Home page!

User poems are sometimes graced by images and textures stored on our site
courtesy of GRSites.com, Sandy Hradil, and Sherri Emily.


Welcome, Guest!

Become part of our
friendly community
of on-line writers!

Join today!
 
Username:
 
Password:
 
Forget Username or Password?

Members On Line: 0
Guests On Line: 61
Members in Chat: 0


Happy Birthday


 
We Thank You!

For your donations
and subscriptions!

Creative-Poems.com
P.O. Box 7931
The Woodlands, TX 77387

 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
monovalent-defence
Copyright © 2003-2017 Creative-Poems.com.  All Rights Reserved. Use of this site is subject to certain
Terms of Service rules which constitute a legal agreement between you and Creative-Poems.com.
By providing links to other sites, Creative-Poems.com neither approves of, endorses, or gurantees
any information, opinions, or products found on those sites. Users follow links at their own risk.