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Author Name: Freeluzzyluz62000 9 Comments
Date Added: July 04, 2005 20:07:56 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Ebony (naked)

 

Ebony, from where does your color come?

Why is it that your softness is softer than some?

Your lips are so full,

kisses like sweet peaches and plums.

For you remain beautiful,

so smooth like buttered rum.

Ebony, from where does your thickness rise?

Why is it that men are drawn by your thick hips and thighs?

Your waist is so small,

you're like a hour glass with eyes.

Built to suit your culture,

you tend to take each race with surprise.

Ebony, from where are your black pearls found?

Why is it they bare the most beautiful color of brown?

For surely they attest to glory,

from the way they sit upon your chest.

Sprinkled with femimine sweetness,

that only man and child would know best.

Ebony, why is it that you are built so complex from behind?

Why is it that every curve seems to be maxamized?

You posess a femimine gait,

one of  ancesterial pride.

Your head,

erect,

full of beautiful thoughts up high.

Ebony, why is your hair so fine and thick?

Why does it coil at the roots and shine as the sun hits?

You decorate it with shells

and braid beautiful braids down your neck.......

For you know its your crown,

a crown of glory above the rest.

Ebony, from where do your eyes come?

Why are they so beautiful and rounder than some?

From the darkest of browns,

to the lightest colors found,

They remain flawless,

undefected by what surrounds.

Like a rare purple orchid,

among white lillies on the ground.

Your beauty lies naked,

to be seen by all around.

Ebony, you are beautiful,

beautiful just because

God made you

And He did it with love.

Author's Notes:
I've had little bit of writer's block, but now I'm slowly coming out of it. I've been searching for inspiration but I failed to realize that its everywhere, I just had to find it.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeIkoli Ndombo Bongongo on April 1, 2010 01:48:59 PM Report
still a great poem in my book.great1
Comment By: FreeIkoli Ndombo Bongongo on February 1, 2006 05:27:20 PM Report
u have no idea how many times i have read ur ebony poems.they r truly great.simply put i love them so much.ikoli
Comment By: FreeIkoli Ndombo Bongongo on October 7, 2005 10:31:24 PM Report
i am speechless,this poem takes my breath away.a masterpiece.
Comment By: FreeSoulfulPoeticKing on August 3, 2005 11:33:14 PM Report
wow..i really liked how you wrote this one..for each two questions, you reasoned so well with your answer..keep doin' ya thing and keep it real..I do like this write, so imma prolly add it to my favz. everything flows so nice..it's just great!!..hope to read more of ya work!..God Bless Ya!!..be safe..~1 Love~
-SoulfulPoeticKing-

Comment By: FreeN.M.Sodergran on August 2, 2005 04:05:16 PM Report
I just loved how you sprinkled all those small questions throughout the poem, highlighting the mysterious essence of true beauty! Simply stunning as I am sure your ebony highness is ;)
Comment By: FreeDamon D. Brewer on July 29, 2005 11:19:04 PM Report
And you write this from writers block? I want to see what you write without writers block. Please let me know when you are over it so that I can read what you have written without writers block bothering you. This is a great job.
Damon
Comment By: FreeVince on July 15, 2005 02:43:26 AM Report
wow. That was beautiful. Truly.

Thanks for sharing.

ViNce
Comment By: FreeFLETCHER on July 8, 2005 09:45:39 AM Report
Like a rare purple orchid,
among white lillies on the ground.
Your beauty lies naked,
to be seen by all around.
This is excellent!
Your expression is so tasteful and exciting.
Your beauty within is showing through out!
Yours .................Fletch

Comment By: FreeSavanahB on July 7, 2005 11:33:13 PM Report
Chels, you're back with a bullet! This is captivating and so proud and beautiful! You floored me! Jude




 


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