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Author Name: FreeWishfulSinful 19 Comments
Date Added: June 20, 2005 16:06:26 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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To Her

All her friends came by

Whispering

Laughing

Pretending

trying to impress her

The ones that know her well press on

Her thigh

Her chin

Her sorrow

keeping her from seeing herself

Those passing strangers saw it

With her

In her

On her

hoping to caress her desire

She cleanses them of needs

Without knowing

Without feeling

Without telling

anyone ever

If one day she found out

What she is

Where she was

When she’s going

she would take it all for herself

Let’s keep her where we want it

In the dark

Unaware

Under covers

in secret.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeSensual Sorceress on September 10, 2012 09:24:25 AM Report
This still makes me cry.
Comment By: FreeAngel on August 9, 2007 05:22:25 AM Report
Magnificent well deserved award congrats mighty fine piece of writing

 

Love Angelxx

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on June 22, 2007 02:34:23 PM Report
Chuck... This award is so rewarding to say the least... Powerful poem full of whats happening to..Her.. I must say I best watch for your poems a master at words and your voice fits the poems..Very interesting poem ....
~ She Whispers

Comment By: Freeb doneff on August 13, 2006 12:10:44 AM Report
I have to tell you, this grabbed me from the first line..and when it let me go at the end, I wasn;t sure if I wanted to strangle you for being such a good writer, hug you for winning an award because this sure as hell deserves one, or just stay sitting here with my mouth open..the latter is what happened. Wow..Barbie who says, Congrats!
Comment By: FreeTracy Fletcher on August 12, 2006 11:20:34 PM Report
Congratulations on winning a Featured Poem Award.
Tracy

Comment By: FreeLinear Z on August 8, 2006 06:12:52 PM Report
A peice of truth, expertly executed.

Congratulations on the featured.




Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on August 8, 2006 07:18:39 AM Report
Chuck~
I enjoyed this piece, so good!
Congratulations on your award.
(*Moon~

Comment By: FreeCynthia Jones on August 7, 2006 08:55:17 PM Report

Congrats on your muchly deserved award. *S* Whispering Winds


Comment By: PremiumAnn on August 7, 2006 01:45:25 PM Report
Congratulations Chuck. Excellent style in this piece.


Comment By: FreeJillian K. Alexis on August 7, 2006 10:25:55 AM Report
Congratulations Chuck for winning a featured poem award...Hugz...Jillian
Comment By: FreeGlata on August 7, 2006 07:39:07 AM Report
congrats, Chuck! Beautiful write, and very deserving of this award!

Hugs...

glata

Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on August 6, 2006 08:06:59 PM Report
Congratulatins, Chuck, I always liked this piece. A well-deserved winner.
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on August 6, 2006 06:46:41 PM Report
Chuck:  congratulations on your very well deserved Feature Poem Award.

 

 

Lady Dragonwyck

Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on July 21, 2006 05:18:04 AM Report
I'll be honest, when I first read this, I saw the line "Let's keep her where we want it" as an acceptance of selfishness. However, now I know who the 'Her' in the title is, I see now it is more a vow of protection. Excellent piece of writing, Chuck.
Comment By: FreePamela A. Lamppa on June 25, 2006 12:49:27 PM Report
...hoping to caress her desire - interesting line that packs a punch in this observational piece.

 

It is a power, oppression is, keeping it where we want it, for ourselves, in secret, without . . . freedom.  She/It could be so much and yet spoon fed so kept from living...

 

You always pull that one dark string that circles every soul.  Excellent "thinking" work - again.  I am never disappointed when I stop on one of your pieces. ~Pam

Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on June 23, 2005 02:57:38 PM Report
Such a powerful write Chuck... secrets have so much power in them for both the one keeping it and the one it's being kept from.
Gentle Dove
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on June 21, 2005 01:07:11 PM Report
Really enjoyed your style.
looking forward to reading more. Alison SW
Comment By: ModeratorHenry M. on June 21, 2005 06:14:13 AM Report
This poem is in a word GREAT! It hits an emotional bone. Bravo!! Henry
Comment By: AdminRichardM on June 20, 2005 05:31:01 PM Report
*Wispers quetly* In every way, just so fine, Chuck. So perseptive and so clever. A wonderful tribute!
Rich




 


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