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Author Name: Freesybilvane 20 Comments
Date Added: June 08, 2005 06:06:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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On visiting Salisbury Cathedral

Another drop in the chalice

You are ultimately

Liquid

And so is

Your pain

It flows into a vessel

Nothing is ever lost

of what you felt

You walk just slightly

Above the departed

Leaving just enough room

For their ideas to

Brighten your path

If you remember to live in a way

That would have made them proud

In their abode of light

Then drop by drop

The chalice is filled

And in the very end

The golden cornucopia

Will bear rich fruit

For all

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBarry Hodges on February 25, 2009 01:16:50 PM Report
I have been to Salisbury Cathedral, also to Cologne, although I have not yet written a poem in my "Memories" sequence about either city. Perhaps I will.
Comment By: FreeFilthy on December 24, 2007 07:38:15 AM Report
Sometimes i'm sure poems win an award because no-one else had entered, you on the other hand would win even if the entire site entered! Congrats on the award Heike, another one that's very much deserved.
Comment By: FreeJames Thomas Whitworth on July 21, 2006 05:53:21 AM Report
You walk just slightly

Above the departed

Leaving just enough room

For their ideas to

Brighten your path

 

--What a beautiful thought this is. The language of the soul. Thank you for sharing this.

Comment By: FreeDavid Rojas on June 12, 2006 10:39:48 PM Report
Elegant, and I find it a bit sensual in a modest sense.

Beautifully expressed; every word in it's rightful place.

 

Congrats on the award!

 

-Rojas

 

Comment By: FreeJoanna Szymanska on March 5, 2006 07:25:39 AM Report
what I really appreciate in this poem is the image that becomes "solid". Then I am able to taste it, drink it and swallow the liquid from the chalice. Great work! Thank you!
Comment By: FreeJoe Petro on March 4, 2006 10:49:50 AM Report
What a beautiful, uplifting poem. Drop by drop we all try. I'm so pleased to have found this one. jp
Comment By: FreeDarren Scott on January 10, 2006 03:44:54 AM Report
Superb work, award well earned.
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on July 3, 2005 10:11:19 AM Report
Just realised this peom won an award and never was one so deserving.
Alison SW
Comment By: FreeRoger Bacon on July 1, 2005 02:37:11 PM Report
This is very inspiring and beautiful. Congrats on your award. Well deserved.
Comment By: FreeCathy on June 30, 2005 10:35:17 AM Report
Congratulations on your award for this beautiful and marvelous poem you really deserved this award Love every word of this excellent poem
Cathy
Comment By: FreeMary on June 29, 2005 03:03:39 PM Report
congrats on your award this was very well deserving this was so beautiful hope u read some of mine please read some of mine ur friend
:*)MARYANN:*)
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on June 29, 2005 01:11:47 AM Report
Congratulations on winning the award
for this beautiful inspired piece.
Linda
Comment By: FreeWith pain comes strength on June 28, 2005 10:59:09 AM Report
Congratulations on the award

nik
Comment By: FreeSamantha Firefly on June 28, 2005 03:35:00 AM Report
Beautiful poem. I love Salisbury Cathedral. Congratulations on your award.
Samantha.
Comment By: FreeEric on June 28, 2005 12:48:31 AM Report
Very beautiful, in every way. Another masterpiece from your mind.
Comment By: FreeLady Literary on June 27, 2005 08:10:52 PM Report
Beautiful!
Congrats pn your award.
Lisa
Comment By: FreeCorina on June 20, 2005 05:19:16 PM Report
I read this poem several times before daring to say something. All I dare to say is that this poem is very inspired, very smart. And it leaves a sensation of optimism and tranquility. Very beautiful, but from you, all that comes, is beautiful.
Comment By: FreePaul Peter McLean on June 12, 2005 01:39:21 PM Report
I've just come back from England, during which, in my role as godfather, I had to attend a few ceremonies in a few churches. This great poem makes me wish one of them had been Salisbury cathedral. But I'm sure a poet of your calibre would find inspiration wherever you went. I love the motif you present here, of the drops of our life flowing into a chalice which, at the end of a life lived well, will be our rich reward. Great work Heike.
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on June 9, 2005 09:16:49 AM Report
Breathtakingly beautiful, meaningfull and symbolic all in one fell swoop. Heiki at her very best!!! Visionary revelation.
Alison SW into favs
Comment By: Freejag on June 8, 2005 09:39:22 PM Report
Wow that's a treat




 


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