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Author Name: Adminrich53 8 Comments
Date Added: May 22, 2005 15:05:23 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Your Star



 


The motion of distant stars,
Over our heads could I alter,
As easy as I could change,
This feeling of love for you.

Push them around I offered,
Make right the time and space.
Dance with the forces of nature,
I said for the rest of my days.

Sadly, even stars themselves expire.
Their dusty essence, follows.
Just so as my pain recedes,
My love for you still remains.

Love, like the tiniest bluish nova,
Shines bravely with a brand new face.
Starting on a another journey,
No longer maintaining the same pace.

After former self's implosion done,
Against further change balanced.
Love burns strong and bright,
Casting everything shed to shadow.

 

Author's Notes:

"Supernova II" courtesy of Chris Chandler - www.TotalityEclipse.com

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeVanessa Cush on April 16, 2006 10:33:04 PM Report
"borrows poem" straight into my favorites. :)
Comment By: FreeStarlit on March 30, 2006 11:42:22 PM Report
I was so mesmerized by this........the color, the picture,the words. Beautiful...STAR*
Comment By: FreeAmber P on June 26, 2005 05:23:24 PM Report
this one is really great too. like how you compared the two. wonderful imagery.
psAmber
Comment By: FreeCathy on June 26, 2005 10:50:23 AM Report
WOW the comparisons here are delightful your love and a star both burn brightly and forever. Suberb. Your imagery was perfect your words heartfelt. This poem will forever twinkle with your love like a star.
Excellent
Cathy
Comment By: FreeSavanahB on May 23, 2005 07:25:26 PM Report
Beautiful, soft, and resigned to love having taken up permanant residence. How long does the light keep shining after a star dies...that's how long you'll keep loving ...Brilliant, laddie buck, just lovely - Jude

Youbie Newbie, you're supposed to furnish me hankies when you write things like this that make my heart hurt. Don't force me to have to give you the 'proper care and feeding of a Jude' speech...........

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on May 22, 2005 10:24:11 PM Report
RICHARD,
THIS IS SO VERY SAD HOW I FEEL THE LOVE YOU STILL HAVE FOR HER..MY FRIEND TEXAS HOLDS YOU CLOSE>>~ SHE
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on May 22, 2005 09:05:50 PM Report
Love and the cosmos...What a lovely comparison. Love is not something we mortals seem to be able to do anything about..It is, or it isn't...Beautiful poem, Rich...len
Comment By: FreeJillian K. Alexis on May 22, 2005 04:05:15 PM Report
Richard, such beauty contained upon this page. I love your' writing, so much that I added u to my "Favorite Author's List". U leave me in awe with this write...Jillian




 


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