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Author Name: Adminrich53 6 Comments
Date Added: April 27, 2005 12:04:24 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Do

Submerged by memories,
There is no way to rest.

No future there, I come ashore
Let go this waterlogged vest.

I have to find the strength within,
To shed what failed the test.

Some believe the old man has magic,
So I need to be my best.

To do for those I love, is prime.
Can't afford to feel this wretched inside!

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeLeila on April 18, 2010 01:27:11 AM Report
Hi Richard,

The last line is very thoughtful. I enjoyed the poem.

leila

Comment By: FreeBlack on September 4, 2009 12:51:15 AM Report
People say it is a talent to be capable of putting a piece of ones self on a page. A talent very few posses and those that do rarely use it. I'm glad you've found yourself to be one of those few people and share it so openly with us here. I feel guilty I'm not as honest a man. Very emotion evoking poem here.

Comment By: FreeTessa on December 28, 2005 01:09:55 AM Report
Truly written from the core of a beautiful soul.
Comment By: PremiumLindaM on April 27, 2005 11:07:56 PM Report
A very heartfelt piece full of emotion.
Linda
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 27, 2005 04:48:40 PM Report
RICHARD, THE PAST STAYS IN THE PAST BUT SOME MEMEORIES JUST STAY SWEET IN OUR MIND.. GREAT POEM INDIA`SHE
Comment By: Freecrying wolfe on April 27, 2005 12:59:56 PM Report
Well, what to say?? Submerged by memories...memories that wont let go...like I've said before, some memories I'd rather keep...we just cant let ourselve become wretched as you put it...

Wolfe...




 


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