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Author Name: Adminrich53 4 Comments
Date Added: April 23, 2005 19:04:57 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Solvent

I have been wounded before
Many, many times it seems.
Each at another location
Just deeper and at angles less extreme.

As you get a little older
Each misstep becomes more important not less
So each time that it happens
You seem less likely to find happiness.

Yet I love all who brought me here
Kicking and screaming
I loved each one in their day
And painfully watched 'em go their merry way.

Bad company never helps
Alcohol only delays
A good run clears the head
And your guitar is still your best bet!

From suffering each time before
Did music break me free
But not this last time, no! 
Instead it seemed to bind me!

Following something sweet she sent
A special gift from her I see
I came upon to this brave new place
Decided to stay and make a dent.

When you love someone so special
You must do whatever they whisper
And sooner or later that will include
Learning to shut up and stop the hassle.

An effort of will that is so special
As a big loving gift at the whistle
But its hard as hell not to be heard
And will eventually grind you to gristle.

Your words are the key, man
Go write 'em all down you
I promise you'll feel much better
When you see what ails you.

I thank you all for reading
I really, really do
'Cause your eyes are like solvent
That dissolves all my glue.

Author's Notes:

You all are great, thanks!

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Comments:
Comment By: Freemaggie lopez sherry wilbur on October 29, 2010 07:59:50 PM Report
Your most welcome and tis a lovely tributal write  and dedication. More peolpe should have read this . It is sweet enough to give a tooth ache. Always Maggie. Even in the fear here i sense passion and desire , desire to keep going passion to love . Always maggie
Comment By: FreeThe Mystic Poet on October 13, 2006 12:38:37 AM Report
Wow, very powerful. I've got your back, Rich...if ever you need a shoulder...i've got two to lend!
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on April 27, 2005 04:57:25 PM Report
RICHARD, WE ALL KNOW OF THIS WORLD.. FRIENDS ARE FOR EVER DON'T YOU KNOW THAT?? ~((SMILES )) ~ SHE
Comment By: Freecrying wolfe on April 23, 2005 09:50:47 PM Report
Well Rich, I am glad you found CP...writing does release a lot of tension...If I knew how to play the guitar I would ( I am a big fan of music)...keep writing and I'll keep reading...

Wolfe....




 


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