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Author Name: FreeJimiMuller 3 Comments
Date Added: April 13, 2005 22:04:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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A False Hope

Note: This poem will most likely be very controversial to whomever reads it. Please bare with me, as it is something I feel. I will understand hostility, but please keep it to a minimum.
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I hate to tell you all, but God is fake
His son put here as human waste
It just so happens that the Bible was written
About a crazy man who can cure through listenin'
The most reproduced story in all of the land
While this person dies with a nail in his hand
It was said he came to remove our curse
Yet we all have been since he was put on this Earth
Made and used as a sense of purpose
It is for the church you will purchase
Ironic how things are defined in a book
Satan is real, Revelations, look
I'm sorry to all of you, that story is a joke
About a man who thought he was almighty and was really on coke

I believe in Science and evolution to this day
It seems to me, that it could be the only way
How can a God magically control?
His plan has only one hole...

Its all fake, fake as can be
More fake than little green Leprichauns you don't see
But please, if you read, don't be offended
Its just that for me, his control has ended

Never came through and never was right
After all those times of praying at night
I cried in my sleep because it was Satan I hailed
And because I tried to follow a God that failed

Author's Notes:
I understand that many people will be offended by this. They are my views and take responsibility in full, yet do not with to debate. I apologize to all those that are offended, as that was not my intent at all. I simply wrote a poem about something I felt. Please understand that.
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Comments:
Comment By: Freejoey on November 24, 2005 06:29:35 PM Report
I Take it you never read the bible
because its not really about just God
Thier are many more people in the bible
I dont belive everything in the bible
Like the red sea was was opened in the middle
just for moses then closed on the army following
But thier is alot of wisdom in the bible no matter if its
true to you or not you can learn something

Im not mad over your poem
its well done but find the facts
before you comment on something
Comment By: Freeleahlopez on June 6, 2005 08:49:06 AM Report
i aint a believer in god. but that dont mean to say i am against people who are. everyone as rights to their own opinion and its up to the individual how they express it all in all i thought this was quite a good powerful written piece.
Comment By: FreeNichole on May 31, 2005 03:12:46 PM Report
well............im a christian and i believe in god with all my heart but i respect your beliefs and beliefs aside i thought this was a very good poem

nichole




 


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