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Author Name: Freebluefish 4 Comments
Date Added: April 01, 2005 12:04:49 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Poem Jar

Harm not winds of night

and how they rustle the shingles

of the roof.

Images flow also in my soul

from currents

of skies unmark boundaries…

 

How strange to find

words stacked within

regressing in intersection--

words within words.

Sounds within sounds.

lines intertwined inside,

little poem i shall

keep you in the small

mason jar of my soul.

i shall never release

you into the coldness of the world.

the indifference of closets

the philosophies of waste paper baskets….

 

i cannot share you

for i need you

to tremble in the unnoticed

corners of my throat.

As i cover the surface of my body

with your escaping whispers

For others cannot read

the leaves of your unfolding

or the disturbance of your birth…

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on January 23, 2006 02:58:16 AM Report
Andrew~
Did you have slight tears well up inside when you finished this?
Ive so many writes that I just keep locked inside only to share with someone that will cherish them as I...
Just lovely..
(*Moon~
Comment By: FreeMary AnnieA.V. on April 2, 2005 03:46:08 AM Report
thats abeautiful jar you have painted.. enjoyed every bit.. exquisite.. anna maria
Comment By: FreeSamantha Firefly on April 1, 2005 02:08:42 PM Report
I like this very much. It's creative and nicely written.
Samantha.
Comment By: FreeCorina on April 1, 2005 01:16:02 PM Report
This is amazing, really amazing, what feeling, what wisdom, what emotion and talent, all in this wonderful crucible.




 


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