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Author Name: Freebluefish 3 Comments
Date Added: March 25, 2005 07:03:34 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Unspeach

i am not unable

to say your lips

are luscious

they seem to hold the trembling

of language lustrous mysterious.

Such wondrous moments beyond touch.

Beyond the clock of meaning.

My lack of cleverness cloaks me

in darkness.

For my words

in comparison are shadows

Sounds as i form them

that shall limp away

into the remains of the day

like my expectations

mustering like the industry of ants

finding the hidden corpse of reality.

The imprecision of my words

always haunt vaguely

the quietness of my throat.

Emptiness waits in fullness

as you breath your words into me

as your sentences complete me

Fit me with all the articles of your speech.

While my speaking evaporates

the gentleness of your touch.

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Comments:
Comment By: FreesecretVsmile on April 4, 2008 11:00:22 AM Report
Brilliant! So honest and clever.
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on January 29, 2006 02:31:00 AM Report
Andrew~
Stunning beauty this woman~she moves you..can feel it through your expression of words...wow!
Lovely~

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 25, 2005 09:52:32 AM Report
ANDREW,
THIS IS WITH SO MUCH FEELINGS THAT YOU HAVE WRITTEN HERE.. ITS A VERY MOVING POEM THAT CARESSES THE THOUGHTS OF THE MIND.. WELL DONE MY FRIEND
SOUNDS LIKE A MAN FALLING IN LOVE??
JUST BEAUTIFUL! ~ FRIENDS ~ SHE




 


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