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Author Name: FreeFLETCH 4 Comments
Date Added: March 11, 2005 09:03:33 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Sight of the blind

 

Looking for some action, I rode half way across the state.
Felt  like causin' some destruction, I've been feelin' so irate.
With a face made of stone, when fate was more kind,
I went on a warpath, with the sight of the blind.
Been gone a year now, but the questions still remain-
Is this remorse I feel, or have I gone insane?
I risked my life, my foutune as well, living with fury, going thru hell.
Learned enough to wonder if I'll ever gain control.
The desperate hand of futune,seems to burn into my soul.
Torn up from the inside, I've been crying out in pain.
All I know is I'm still breathing and all my runnings been in vain.
There's something in the darkness, I hear the footsteps as they fall.
Creatures of the night cast their shadows on the wall.
If they want to stay alive, they will stay away from here.
With the sight of the blind, all I smell is fear.
As the full moon rises, there is a chill in the air.
The hunter is now the hunted. I'll bring death without a care.










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Comments:
Comment By: FreeChere on May 5, 2005 04:28:36 AM Report
this is a great one, left the hairs on my arm standing to attention. great job
xxx
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on March 17, 2005 12:56:46 PM Report
WOW____ THIS IS AWESOME WRITE MY FRIEND
WE ALL KNOW ABOUT THE CREATURES OF THE NIGHT AND ITS SWEATY FEARS...
WONDERFUL POEM ~ LOVE YA! ~ SHE
Comment By: FreeJames Lagoski on March 13, 2005 12:09:29 PM Report
Dear Fletch-
I fully agree with Jullian and her comments-
It painted a vision as the reader follows each line-
I thought it was a great poem!
Best Wishes~
Peace~
James
Comment By: ModeratorJillian K. Alexis on March 11, 2005 10:38:46 PM Report
Fletch,
This is an amazing poem. The rhyming scheme is wonderful, and it flows so effortlessly. I think this is one of your' best poems I have read yet. I would give this a 10 star rating. Great job my friend.
Jillian




 


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