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Author Name: Freebluefish 4 Comments
Date Added: December 20, 2004 21:12:50 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Slender Arms
In quietness
your mind does not leak.
How i follow you
like tiny moon.
My words are moonlight
gleaming unnoticed
Who can look
under the dust of meaning.

Paleness is my specialty
luminous i follow
but in the end
i realize
as i become lost
in the dragonfly comets
of speech.

i cannot follow
the space between us
is cold and deep
so i keep hidden
the nature of my orbit
and my watch laughs
at me with its slender arms
in the nature of my distance
gears tremble in their turning.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on April 30, 2007 06:46:18 PM Report
Andrew~
I feel you..good write.
Always Somewhere,
(*Moon~

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 21, 2004 08:01:29 AM Report
i cannot follow
the space between us
is cold and deep
so i keep hidden
the nature of my orbit
and my watch laughs
at me with its slender arms
in the nature of my distance
gears tremble in their turning.THIS SAYS IT ALL??? LOVE THIS! ~ LOVE SHE

Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on December 21, 2004 02:51:58 AM Report
Beautiful...as always! =))

~Barbara~
Comment By: FreeDoesn't Matter on December 20, 2004 10:14:36 PM Report
Wow. . . that was my initial reaction.




 


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