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Author Name: Freebluefish 2 Comments
Date Added: December 12, 2004 08:12:09 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Hidden Here
In the house of suffering
there are many ducts to crawl.
Many shadows hiding
in the corners of darkness undetectable.
Many walls to tumble on...

i must make my own light
in the inadequacy of my flesh
as i journey on my knees
in endless prayers of mystery.
How the rooms are riddles
enclosing trapping
my thoughts like mouse.
Knowledge may be empty--
but still my gentleness unfolds
no matter
the knots that situations practice
on my insignificance.

Whisper tears--
Tenderness is its own reward
Sharing and inescapable pleasure.
Radiance you always flowing
for my heart is glass
and my eyes are mirrors
reflecting the little spark
that is hidden here
gift of a borrowed candle gleams.....
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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on December 12, 2004 08:25:52 AM Report
Whisper tears--
Tenderness is its own reward
Sharing and inescapable pleasure.
Radiance you always flowing
for my heart is glass
and my eyes are mirrors
reflecting the little spark
that is hidden here
gift of a borrowed candle gleams.....
THIS MY LONELY FRIEND SAYS IT ALL... SO SAD..SO MANY FEELINGS!! BIG HUGZ FROM TEXAS!! LOVE ~ SHE

Comment By: FreeKatherine on December 12, 2004 08:20:57 AM Report
Wow, this is a great poem. I love it! It's amazing...it really made me think. Great job!




 


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