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Author Name: Freebluefish 1 Comments
Date Added: December 06, 2004 07:12:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Hidden Sences
In the paths
of a mysterious world
what senses are hidden...
What eye or ear or lip
awaits to be awaken.

In the darkness what awaits
a light to surprise the dimness.
A calmness that signifies
the ghosts of our passages.
Hidden senses stir
and infuse discovery between
the puzzle of the sky
and the enigma of the ground.
Effuse for what is hidden
shall one day see
for what is unspoken
shall surly find a voice
and trace a word
that was once invisible....
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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on December 7, 2004 12:06:11 AM Report
"awaits to be awaken."...may I suggest "awaits to awaken" or "awaits to be awakened"

"what senses are hidden..."...many, obviously...as stated within this poem. Well done Andrew!

~Barbara~





 


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