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Author Name: Freebluefish 2 Comments
Date Added: November 30, 2004 16:11:27 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Storm Outside
Rhythm of sky
snowflakes hide
as they visit
the curved nudeness of the ground.
how the secret leaves of my desire
are frozen in the mystery of pureness.



Why do the touch of your lips
seem so distant
like the discovery of marvelous things
like an unknown world
beyond the pleasure of naming
your eyes behind the strands
of interfering hair
forests of tresses
behind which
shimmers the pools of sharing
how they brush the surface of your wonder
how i wish that
i was a simple snowflake
melting on the tongue
of your words.
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Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on December 1, 2004 01:34:40 PM Report
"like an unknown world
beyond the pleasure of naming"...perhaps beyond the pleasure of imagining.

Splendid depiction of longing...another fine gift of words!

~Barbara~ *catching snowflakes on her toungue*
Comment By: FreeSue Tancheff on November 30, 2004 05:33:00 PM Report
Andrew

You most certainly have a way with words and this was absolutely beautiful.

Take care........Sue




 


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