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Author Name: Freefanofjims 6 Comments
Date Added: November 29, 2004 08:11:55 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Scars~2

Scars
How many times have I often stated
How Iím always feeling so frustrated
I have many things imprisoned inside
Forgotten, alone and silent Iíve cried

There is so much that I want to say
But I havenít learned how to push play
My hands outstretched yet no one cares
And Iím weary from fixing my own repairs

So Itís time I quit trying to keep the score
I find it doesnít mater to me anymore
With my soul escaping through my many scars
Iím grateful that I have made it this far

Author's Notes:
Because I have been so busy getting book 1 of The Journey published and prepping book 2 It has been awhile since I placed the 2 poems up for choices to be placed in the book 5- The Best of The Journey~So Far-
So your choices to choose from are~
~Same Direction or Scars~
Whichever poem receives the most comments will be placed into The Best of-
Thank you for letting me know which is your favorite-
Peace~
James

PS~Book 1 of The Journey-Lost and Confused-
is now available through Lulu.com-
The site address is posted on my home page here at Creativepoems-
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAshley Marrie on May 6, 2006 03:34:25 PM Report
short and well written.. it holds many meanings in few lines.. and though the words are simple you can tell there is more to it
always
ashley marrie
Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on May 7, 2005 08:46:54 AM Report
James, this is a true account about some of the "demons" which haunt us in our everyday lives.
Many if not all of us are subjected to feel this way at times.
Very powerful write my friend.

Sharon JJ
Comment By: Freegrneyedbtch on January 30, 2005 03:28:51 PM Report
i could have written this! how i can relate to these feelings & how i soooo appreciate your persespective! you're always making me think. another great write. keep on-livi
Comment By: FreeJeff on January 5, 2005 08:15:51 AM Report
I think most can relate to this poem of desperation and frustration with daily life as it comes at us.
Deep write here James!
Nicely done.

Jeff
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on December 10, 2004 04:24:16 PM Report
Yes! james. How much I can identify with this. The inner agony waiting to be expressed and freed but how and why?
You are well on your road now...so many people will now benefit from the torment you have known. The anger and confusion of losing your friend.I like to think that even the darkest episodes give us something and as a fellow warrior wounded in battle I am so happy to know you my dear James.
Comment By: FreeGlata on November 29, 2004 08:08:28 AM Report
James,
this one seems to be the one that speaks to me the most. I've been down this same road...fixing my own repairs, as you so rightly stated.
I love this one, and am certainly looking forward to being able to purchase a copy of your new book. Congrats, by the way! I'm proud of you :)
Love, Your sister in NC
Glata




 


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