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Author Name: Freebluefish 2 Comments
Date Added: November 09, 2004 22:11:54 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Follow Me
Frowning Doorway why do you
open into the plots of tree
as they speak of the philosophy of fall..
Your doorknobs seem so cold
as the innocence
of my fingernail awakens
your brass solemness

Raindrops how you touch
and run down my lips.
Streams of cool caressing spheres
echoes without-- about spaces--
around the spaces--
exterior chambers of my flesh
and the arches of eyebrows clean..

i shall not eat shadows forever
for i shall always be myself,
others may forget themselves
and most of all me
but my burden
shall never allow me to forget--
my name written in my ribs
when the heart falls
silent in the liquid noon's eyes.

i shall turn and walk
beyond the cocoon of my mind
and my name like a delightful
friend with a voice silk like music
shall follow me into the darkness.
i can almost feel the touch
of my dead shadow and the weightless
flow of shimmering...
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeMoon Fairy on May 11, 2006 08:54:47 PM Report
Andrew~
Please forgive when I am unable to respond to some of your writes..just find myself lacking words not because there are none, just hard to grasp.
Tracie~

Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 9, 2004 11:19:40 PM Report
ANDREW,
WHAT CAN I SAY ONCE MORE YOUR WORDS SAYS SO MUCH INSIDE A TANGLED HEART?? LOVE ~ SHE
>> READ BURNING BLOODY STEEL??
~ LOVE ~ SHE




 


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