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Author Name: Freebluefish 1 Comments
Date Added: November 09, 2004 21:11:45 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Your Disturbance
“Hiding Light”

How you sparkle
when you speak.
How do you manage to hide light
in your lungs
what strange fruit you eat
with your glistening teeth...

i see the sparks of your words
forming rainstorms of knowledge.
and the paleness of my flesh
reflects your beauty
my skin is ugly on its surface
you supply its sheen
as your words gleam there
and my hair stands when you speak
to catch over the distance between us
your sounds so silver
on its dim trembling strands....

Calmness cover me
as my eyes flutter circles
in the presence of your disturbance.
Do not be mad at me
for i listen to you
more than you know.
For you offer splendor
from magic of your supple smile.
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Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 9, 2004 11:16:44 PM Report
ANDREW,
see the sparks of your words
forming rainstorms of knowledge.
and the paleness of my flesh
reflects your beauty
my skin is ugly on its surface
you supply its sheen
as your words gleam there
and my hair stands when you speak
to catch over the distance between us
your sounds so silver
on its dim trembling strands
WHAT CAN I SAY?? WHO IS THIS FOR?? LOVE ~ SHE




 


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