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Author Name: Freebluefish 2 Comments
Date Added: November 08, 2004 08:11:33 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Evidence Of Snow
What evidence do i process
that you have crossed this way through
the snows of darkness.
Even the snowflakes conspire against
me and cover your footprints with newness.
Following dispelling tracks
evaporating into whiteness.
Disappearing as a happenstance
one of the contours of your footfall
not coved lofting domains of ice crystals
points the why through
the frozen wood of complexity
as moonlight even seems to chill.

How my eyes glisten
in the inner circle of my eye
While in the cold spaces of passage
the hair of my eyebrows frost
my heart like ice sicles
grows and drips
upon the porch of insight
but i continue
as the candle of my life
feebly shines an ebbing light
how it polishes
the snow with luminosity
the only thing that warms my lips
as your kisses like bruises blue
as my words freeze into to cubes
beyond my tongue
in the blizzard of geometric galaxies
smile swirl in half remember melody
of a cloaking song that i hum as i go on.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on November 8, 2004 06:06:40 PM Report
The theme is carried throughout this poem with descriptive excellence.

Do I like this? Without a doubt, it is marvelous!

~Barbara~
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 8, 2004 10:24:10 AM Report
ANDREW,
HOW YOU AMAZE MY HEART WITH YOUR THOUGHTS?? YOU MUST BE A DEEP FEELING MAN?? LOVE THIS IT GOES INTO MY BOOK OF YOUR POEMS!! ***** the candle of my life
feebly shines an ebbing light
how it polishes
the snow with luminosity
the only thing that warms my lips
as your kisses like bruises blue
as my words freeze into to cubes
beyond my tongue
in the blizzard of geometric galaxies
smile swirl in half remember melody
of a cloaking song that i hum as i go on.

LOVE ~ SHE




 


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