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Author Name: Freebluefish 3 Comments
Date Added: November 03, 2004 23:11:53 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Frustrated Surrealist
i find your cheek
to be mysterious
as i faintly graze
its warm geometry.
Your hips seem to be pyramids
with curving hidden chambers.
How your eyes blue motherships
seem to see through me
as you watch my shadows
on the wall behind me laugh
as the buffalo on my gleaming
belt buckle run
far in a silver metallic curved world
as comets collide,

Your eyelash seems to touch
in the open space
as i blush signals to you
images and symbols flow
in magic oceans..

How i tremble
as monkeys seem to climb up my ankles
and a giraffe of a word
seems to have become caught
in my dry throat
and spins joy like hapless spider
explores your upturning lips.
Even when you wrinkle your lips
keyholes wiggle i smile to reflect
the knobs on your spine
on the surface of my pearly teeth.

Even when you tell me
that i kiss like a goldfish..
It is true for in my soul
i have kept a wondrous goldfish
just for you beloved
you ignore the simple bowl
as my goldfish dances
without feet
and you turn away
as the faucet drips....
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeCorina on November 4, 2004 02:28:03 AM Report
Tenderly lovely and warm.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on November 3, 2004 11:56:41 PM Report
ANDREW,
NOW THIS IS DIFFERENT
NEVER READ A LOVE POEM LIKE THIS QUITE REFRESHING! LOVE ~ SHE
Comment By: FreeAly Manning on November 3, 2004 11:45:39 PM Report
Exquisite write!
Had to read slowly..taking in each word as you painted the canvas...
unique play of words and thoughts...
I truly admire your style....
Keep penning...
Hugs,
Aly




 


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