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Author Name: Freechezza 3 Comments
Date Added: October 15, 2004 18:10:16 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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i give up!
My life is so hard i aint carrying on,
it's difficult to get by when your enemys won.
i'm afraid of nothing when your in my heart,
but when your not i just fall apart!

i cant find my way back to you,
i try to reach, you tell me we're through.
i wish you could see,
you still mean the world to me!

i'll always look back on those sad times,
but they meant my life, i could call you mine.
i aint gonna argue no more,
i've given up, you won the war!
Author's Notes:
this poem is about a guy who for a long time i thought was the one. but then it turned out he wasnt! thanks chezza xxxx
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeDarren Scott on May 24, 2006 05:17:30 AM Report
Nice work, I can feel your pain.
See my ‘the war is over’ based on same emotions!
Keep it up!
Dx
Comment By: FreeDennis on November 7, 2004 06:35:36 AM Report
I like this one you have the heart of a poet your words paint a picture yes sad but free you write about life able to say in words what you can't in life "NICE JOB"
Cheryl

**DENNIS**
Comment By: FreeTee on October 25, 2004 04:09:53 AM Report
I like this poem.. sad though.. most of my poems are sad.depressing.hatefull.. so i dont have much room to talk..
-tee




 


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