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Author Name: Freesybilvane 16 Comments
Date Added: October 09, 2004 15:10:48 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Modern Romance

I wanted to make
Flowers in all colours
Swirl out of your fax machine

I wanted to email you
The spicy smell of the seaside
As autumn sets in

I wanted to leave
The taste of home-made cherry pie
On your answering machine

I wanted to have
The soft breeze of the Caribbean
Delivered to your letter-box

When these plans failed
I doubted whether this was
The golden age of communication

Until your on-screen message
Reached through the firewall
For my old-fashioned heart

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Comments:
Comment By: FreeShruti on April 6, 2006 11:08:43 PM Report
Gosh, I reached here 20 comments too late...brilliant stuff heike, you're the master!
Comment By: FreeJoanna Szymanska on March 6, 2006 07:35:53 PM Report
thank you for the poem. It touched my nostrils, my tongue and my eyes. Not to mention my heart. Your message reached me...
Comment By: FreeLubaina on February 28, 2006 02:25:09 PM Report
Oh my... This is just soooooo very touching. Love it!!! good writing .you have a nice way of putting words together
keep up the good work
Lubs.

Comment By: Freejag on June 8, 2005 09:36:39 PM Report
Real cute poem that is indeed modern and sweet
Comment By: PremiumBruce A. Peaslee on January 7, 2005 01:08:45 PM Report
Heike - Ahh, the magic of the well written word, It can actually evoke the aromas, sounds and sights you described
in your mind's eye and heart.

---Poetrydad---
Comment By: FreeJohannes Benecke on November 30, 2004 05:16:15 PM Report
wow...amazing impressions...very very well done
Comment By: FreeAlison Storm Wolf on October 29, 2004 03:55:03 PM Report
Into favs for me. This poem encompasses all the yearnings of the lover's heart the total longing to give the person of your desire the world on a plate
The last line is just SO powerful and cleverly descriptive with it's contrasts between old fashioned romance and modern technology! I LOVE it Heiki, but then I love all your inspired work!
Alison SW
Comment By: FreeChuck on October 28, 2004 12:21:28 PM Report
Stimulating, Amazing, Wonderful... this is exactly what brilliant poetry is all about... in a word... perfect.. thank you for sharing.
Comment By: FreeMikmaqShaman on October 27, 2004 08:23:09 PM Report
This is the most sensory stimulating poem I have ever read! Please send me the spicy smell of the seaside as autumn sets in!! How truly, honestly, lovely. This is wonderful.
Blessed Be. Mi'kmaq Shaman
Comment By: FreeLeonard Wilson on October 26, 2004 07:08:08 PM Report
The firewall of your old fashioned heart!!! I couldn't love that,any more,Heikie...The world doesn't really change, that much..Only gadgets change...We're still the same people,generation, after generation...len
Comment By: FreeAndrew Rymill on October 19, 2004 11:12:48 PM Report
Such and interesting construction of which the metaphoric payoff is outstanding....
Great poem Heike
Comment By: on October 14, 2004 01:21:43 PM Report
That is beautiful Heike :),you have a very nice style of writing, you have a lot of wonderful inspiration.

Alexy
Comment By: FreePaul Peter McLean on October 13, 2004 04:36:47 PM Report
A love poem for the 21st century; and with a happy ending too. Clever idea, Heike. I hope you IM are very happy.
Comment By: FreeAnya den Teuling on October 11, 2004 03:53:56 PM Report
Great Write, world is changing but love is always with us.
Cat
Comment By: FreeCorina on October 9, 2004 03:34:36 PM Report
I believe you are totally right here. No smell, no touch just cannot balance mere words. Very beautiful and smart.
Comment By: PremiumMary Lou Allen on October 9, 2004 03:21:44 PM Report
Ah, the power and the glory of "The golden age of communication". What did we do before it? Well done, Heike. Very well done. ML




 


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