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Author Name: Freebluefish 3 Comments
Date Added: October 07, 2004 07:10:55 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Tracing Shadows
There is something in you
that is waiting
somehow special
a hidden thing formless
sometimes it rustles in your hair
unnameable and peaks out the windows
of your eyes untraceable
as from what world it is looking from
i cannot guess..

i have failed at riddles
i always pick the wrong branch
of possibility
just like you suggested
i would do.

You are nameless
But i must always walk past dark houses
and i am quite sure
from the light
i see exiting from your
the fleshy house of your flowing body
and your spirits smile.
That it is meant for someone else
so there is nothing for me to do
but watch the leaves simplicity
As they try to follow
the tracks of my shadow
tracing down the hallways
of a passing world.
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeHeike on October 8, 2004 05:56:32 PM Report
Brilliant work, Andrew! It radiates a feeling of melancholy that I can relate to so well...
~Heike
Comment By: FreeCorina on October 8, 2004 07:21:08 AM Report
This is simply beautiful. It is weird though that, although I somehow have almost full comprehension of this poem, I have no words to express that...
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on October 7, 2004 09:20:44 PM Report
THIS WILL GO INTO MY FAVZ,, YOU TOUCH MY MIND WITH THIS POEM.. I ADORE THIS!! ~SHE




 


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