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Author Name: Freesilver_faery 2 Comments
Date Added: September 24, 2004 12:09:26 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Death in your Eyes
Walking through the ages with my heart on my sleave The hunger inside only blood can relieve The passion in my veins pumps to its own beat Forming a verdant river filled with deceit. Starring at you eye to eye finding no suprise In that stare I think I saw death in your eyes. So lay me down in this resting place Even in deathly sleep I'm haunted by your face Finally at peace I've achieved my fate Eternal slumber coupled with your divine state. Falling down again hoping I can rise But then I remember I saw death in your eyes. Nothing can save me now, forsaken am I You had the chance but you refused to try I'm sinking now, death's grip has got its hold Once again my soul has been sold. To keep the image of your face behind my eyes I strive I accept now that I saw my death in your eyes.
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Comment By: FreeJames Mueller on March 18, 2005 01:49:06 PM Report
Very Good Write! One of my favorite might I add. Excellent work again on this one, you have proven to keep me interested in everything I have read thus far. You are an excellent writer, and you should keep writing as long as you can.
Comment By: Freekt on September 25, 2004 01:39:42 AM Report
great poem! you are one magnificent poet, laura!:)




 


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