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Author Name: Freebluefish 3 Comments
Date Added: September 17, 2004 14:09:18 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Forgotten Path
Oh hidden path of gentleness
How you nestle and do run
In curving arcs against
The waiting breathing loyalty of the hills
& locus trees with their limbs
of leafy understanding
How i adore to walk your mysterious ways.
Those that others may have long forgotten
& have left in disrepair.

How my uncomplicated toes
love the wisdom of your smooth stones.
That bless me as my steps do pass
Past the grace of ivies like green hymns
Entwine their serene wordless paths
in green scrolls with flowing script
with your sublime serendipity…

i shall follow while
i may in this swaying world
of darkness scheming
But your gentleness does restore me
As my labor & my yoke disturb me.
Until that day that i shall
seemingly fall asleep
and find your true aspect waiting
running far from this world.---
& you shall be known
in curious blindness of my heart--
in the infinite tributaries of the clouds..

Until that day when other
more wise feet
Shall follow mine
in the invisible shades of passing time….
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Comments:
Comment By: FreeAmanda R. Kaetterhenry on June 23, 2010 03:49:46 PM Report
oh that was breath taking surely. i could never write like that. mine are so childish.
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 18, 2004 10:13:31 AM Report
ANDREW,
HOW I LOVE EVERY POEM YOU WRITE THIS BEAUTIFUL>>> ALWAYS ~ SHE
Comment By: FreeBarbara Demasson on September 17, 2004 04:08:00 PM Report
Splendid work Andrew...faith has never been described so beautifully. =))

~Barbara~




 


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