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Author Name: Freefanofjims 20 Comments
Date Added: September 14, 2004 09:09:13 Average Score: (Needs 2)
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Revenge Has No Reward~3A

Revenge Has No Reward

Standing in the aftermath
The shame of what youíve done
When you could have walked away
Instead you pulled your gun

Revenge has no reward
Itís like pissing in the wind
And once you pull the trigger
Some ones life is going to end

Once you throw your life away
Thereís nothing left to say
Although you may be sorry
You canít bring back yesterday

A parents desperation
Two different mothers cry
Asking the same question
But never knowing why

Entombed within the courtroom
The decisions handed down
Silently they stare at you
Feel your heart begin to pound

The verdict read is guilty
For murder is a crime
Now youíll spend eternity
Serving out your time

The sad part of this story
This goes on most everyday
And for every life thatís stolen
There is a price to pay

So think about your anger
It can burn inside your mind
Because time moves on and once itís gone
It leaves you far behind

Author's Notes:
I know a few of you have read this one before but,
in these times of violence
I decided to repost it-
May the world find the peace of Shangri~La
Best Wishes~
James
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Comments:
Comment By: PremiumDan J. Mazurek on September 15, 2010 01:46:05 PM Report
it is nice when we change from a revengeful spirit to one with compassion.

congrats first time here

Comment By: FreeRobin Constantinou on July 3, 2007 08:25:55 AM Report
words of such wisdom and beauty, you speak of depth and such an imagery i cant speak of in my own way its impossible, well deserved of that award bravo

Comment By: FreeBruce A. Peaslee on August 8, 2005 07:57:26 AM Report
James - this work is so true, Oh that we could put aside bitter difference (that mean nothing in the long run) and foolish pride and think before we act. This world is a crazy place to live. Excellent work.

---Poetrydad---
Comment By: FreexXxCaution, Hazardous to selfxXx on May 31, 2005 09:16:44 PM Report
wow. love the poem it is so strong and so very true. A wise person once said, revenge is short but regrets are forever.....or sumthing like that. anyway love the poem it was a pleasure to read.

much love,
punk
Comment By: FreeSandy J Hradil on February 19, 2005 01:50:44 AM Report
It's very sad but like you say in your poem it happens everyday. EXCELLENT!!!
I wish it was not to be.
Comment By: Freeamy Louise on November 23, 2004 08:50:52 AM Report
james,
your words are heart felt and powerful, and with crime and war and all the pain in this world hopefully your words can perhaps change the minds of many lost souls
you definately deserve the award for this one!!!
bless you james
amy :)
Comment By: FreeSuzanne on October 22, 2004 09:19:18 AM Report
This is a awsome write. You have been blessed with a great talent. Thanks for sharing it with us
Comment By: TrialAnn on October 17, 2004 03:40:34 PM Report
Congratulations on the blue ribbon James. Wonderful work.
Comment By: FreeKaren Lowrey on October 16, 2004 04:09:19 PM Report
The words are so well written that I hope all who feel the urge to kill will take your words to heart. There is nothing sadder than losing someone you love through violence or the prison walls... It is my opinion, your poem should be published in every police station and in every newspaper. Good job and congratulation on your blue ribbon.
Comment By: FreeJeff on October 16, 2004 09:08:09 AM Report
If I was judging, your work would be awarded every week.
But since I'm not, it's a pleasure to see that this award helps get the word out to just how fine of a writer you are.
Congratulations.
Jeff
Comment By: FreeBOB on October 14, 2004 10:57:51 AM Report
Great piece of writing with a strong message, congratulations on your Blue
Ribbon, Bob :)
Comment By: FreeSavanahB on October 14, 2004 01:51:22 AM Report
A belated congrats, James. I've been out of town and missed reading this great piece until now. A mouth full of truth here, friend - Savanah
Comment By: Freejoia on October 12, 2004 11:46:47 AM Report
Enjoyed this hard hitting verse of truth and honesty told in great lines, worthy of the blue, Congratulations James...joia
Comment By: FreeThe Bag Lady on October 12, 2004 01:05:51 AM Report
As you have written, James, there is no reward, as the cycle moves circular~!
It is over and over....Sad, but strong write, as you so well bring to us~!
I am glad that you won the Blue Ribbon Award, congratulations....
Margaret..the bag lady
Comment By: FreeSweetSunshine on October 11, 2004 01:15:39 PM Report
Such a sad write, but wonderful message. Congrats on the blue, James...awesome job!

kate
Comment By: FreeGay Johnson on October 10, 2004 10:24:05 PM Report
Congratulations on the blue ribbon James
Gentle Dove
Comment By: FreeSharon Jorcil James on October 10, 2004 09:53:51 PM Report
I knew this poem was a clear winner when I first read it. Congrats James. Very valuable message for today's world.

Sharon Jorcil-James
Comment By: FreeLady Dragonwyck on October 10, 2004 09:34:13 PM Report
King James: Happy Sunday and a Blue Ribbon for this great poem.


Lady Dragonwyck
Comment By: FreeShe Whispers on September 14, 2004 09:48:38 PM Report
OUR WORLD??? EVERY DAY MORE AND MORE VIOLENCE?? WHERE WILL IT END?? WE ALL KNOW!! ~ ALWAYS FRIENDS ~ SHE
Comment By: FreePili Pubul on September 14, 2004 09:36:13 AM Report
How true my friend, angers blinds not measuring the enormity of the consequences, then is to late, a dead body is not revenge,just emptiness and despair. Great writing ! Pili




 


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